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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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"Fantasy" In the heat of the night I hear you call my name As the rain comes pouring down Dancing & tapping against my window pane The moon hangs high in the ebony sky As the stars come out tonight Sounds of distant thunder Lightning flashes across the sky, what a awesome sight I almost can hear your heartbeat Even though you aren't here Can feel the heat of your skin As though you are quite near In the heat of the night Your body with my lips I want to trace With eyes of love I would sweetly gaze at your beautiful face Wherever you are I want you to know this Mountains I would move, for just another kiss I want to feel your body pressed against mine As higher into escstacy we would climb Satin sheets tangled, as we would become one The night and heat of passion only just begun Flicker of candlelight dances upon the wall As soft sighs would fill the room, your name I would call For now this will remain my fantasy Until I can see you once more Then together in love and passion Our hearts will once again soar Amy M. Kennedy |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
Amy, Given the passion that Tara and I shared when it came to fulfilling each other's fantasies, reading your poem was bittersweet. But it is also very well written and you paint both an erotic and loving picture with your words. - Jeff |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
A heartfelt piece of emotional yearning… thank you for sharing, Amy. ~ Beth |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Amy. . . I think that you've really found it with this one. . . I really do. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
R-- hope it wasn't too sad for you. thank you for your heartfelt reply...you made me smile. Beth-- you are very welcome, and thank you for your lovely comment. hope to read some of your work sometime soon. Sven-- i think i have too  i surelyhope i have. i love her so much. thanks for your support. Take care. ~Amy~ |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Aimster, Very well written, I really enjoyed this. "The moon hangs high in the ebony sky As the stars come out tonight Sounds of distant thunder Lightning flashes across the sky, what a awesome sight" Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'I almost can hear your heartbeat Even though you aren't here Can feel the heat of your skin As though you are quite near' Hey, girlie! You've penned some excellent lines, once again, my friend! Very romantic! Love it!! sp  I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Amy you really dug deep with this one and did a wonderful job...ethome |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Daniel-- thanks for the sweet reply. im glad you enjoyed Kris-- awwww you make me blush thanks girliefor your support. as always it means a lot to me... Ethome-- considering how much i like your work your compliment was huge to me. thanks for making me smile. Take care. ~Amy~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Amy, if I had to use two words to describe this piece they would be erotic and yearning. But as I don't I will say brilliant, encore! I loved it, More, more! take a bow. Be well kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 beautiful! |
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