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Baby....... |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
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Baby.....hold me I need the comfort and the safety I find in your arms just hold me I only kind of want to be alone tonight I'm just pretending to be strong what I really need is for you to curl up next to me wrap your arms around me and pull me possesively into your heat You don't have to talk........... 'cause I'm not in the mood to listen it's cold tonight rub me, warm me up I want to feel nothing else but you Baby, she said on the edge of dreams, ...............hold me. -SEA- |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sea-- beautiful! sometimes all we need is the comfort of the one we love and their arms to give us support. wonderful write straight from your heart. simply lovely. take care. ~amy~  |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
SEA you put it perfectly. Sometimes it feels good to be held and kept warm by someone you know who loves just you. Loved your poem |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe, you knew I adore this too didn't you, and I do. I really do. This is excellant, an amazing beautiful poem, and it's mushy  you knew I'd be hooked. Wonderfully written as always, such craft you have.Take care Mushy < !signature-->Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 11-09-2000).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, To bad it was a dream, enjoyed. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Amy~ thank you so much  Inot2B~ thank you, sometimes it just takes those arms to heal Marsha~ thank you sweet Mushy I'm happy you liked this Seymour~ thank you -SEA |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
ahhhh Sea you make me lonely Don't close your eyes to the possibilities |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Sea.......we all need that on time ..great piece from your hand....as always. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Paula~ Sorry to make you feel lonely...... Charisma~ thank you (((hugs back))) -SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Do I need to tell you of the visions in my head? You know that I would hold you from now until the edge of eternity given the chance now don't you? Well, of course you do. Simply lovely and warming my sweet tender friend, and the poem ain't bad either: |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sea, this is a sweet write and I gotta tell ya it has a melody to its rhyme that I sense can be put to song (GEEEEZ u got talent PoetFriend) Coco |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
"and the safety I find in your arms" You know this is something many people think is always there, but it's not really, and it made the poem in my opinion, I just enjoyed all of it! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
sometimes that all you need is to be held. tender and sweet Sea.. Enjoyed~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sea--A beautiful, heartfelt poem! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ you sweet, sweet man You warm me with your words dear friend, thank you Coco~ (blushing now) thank you very much Irish Rose ~ thank you Victoria~ yes, sometimes thats all it takes Martie~ I'm happy you liked this one, thank you -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Just beautiful ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
SEA, This was beautiful!!! So soft and tender. Excellent writing, my friend. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ glad you liked this one Lone Wolf~ thank you so much! -SEA |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Loved the poem!!!!!!!!! |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Vandana~ wow, thank you!! -SEA |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Nobody does tenderness and brings dreams into reality like you do! Simply wonderful Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Baby this is good writing...now I'm missing those hugs...James |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Most enjoyable poetry comes from the heart... and I enjoyed this so much... SEA~ My regards, sudhir |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh SEA this is just soo soothing and tender, splendid piece of writing dear friend ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Should'nt have to come right out and ask for it...the tenderness should extended with warmth and kindness...real comfort in knowing that you just want to be held and feel that closeness....you're not the only one who has felt like that...lovely write SEA! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
SEA, I have missed reading your wonderful poems. I loveeee this one However.. you make me miss my love hehe. Very well done.~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
P35~ you are so good for my self esteem!! thank you James~ I have lots of hugs for you! Sudhir lyer~ thank you, so happy to see you've stopped in Tracie~ oh sweet friend, thank you Ethome~ thank you for reading RP25~ where you been?! Glad to see you! thank you -SEA [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 11-13-2000).] |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
SEA, there's nothing that's better than being held as you drift off to sleep. Nicely done. Dee I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Oh ... Baby! Nothing else to say. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Wow, SEA. All I can say is that this is definitely one to which I can relate. Excellent write! I love it! sp I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
OK! I'll hold you I need your warmth too! Baby! Lovely write Love this one SEA |
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