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A lack of kiss
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A lack of kiss |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A lack of kiss Just one kiss upon my lips would open a door of tenderness. A kiss to show how much I cared within a kiss my feelings shared. Perchance she witheld her kiss desiring not my tenderness. Could I endure this lack of kiss destined to suffer due to this? Eternally longing for her kiss my heart now cloaked in emptiness. And not a lovely place to be. so I now make a desperate plea. Will you please consider kissing me? Jameslee@November10,2000 |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
James: what a delightful poem - your words made me smile and I'm sure if you ask like this - any girl would welcome your kiss!  Roniece |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
James I'm sorry I can't help you but I'm sure that if you use some wonderful words like you do in this poem......you'll have to get RETREADS on your lips |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
James, *kiss, Kiss* First I thought what the heck gave a small kiss upon your neck then I thought mmmm this is good went a little further than I should and now I am, so bemired just your kisses be desired do you think you could return my affection, help me burn separate by distance deep must kiss my pillow before I sleep dreaming kisses that are heartfelt giving hugs to make you melt. Be well Kethry< !signature--> Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford [This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 11-12-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
A beautiful heartfelt plea...the tenderness of this weave is a soft as velvet~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
the longing can be such a wonderful,but torturous feeling too..i like your form also james..Enjoyed.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh James...I know where this is coming from...and I know how important it is to you...kiss babes Don't close your eyes to the possibilities |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
James~ Reading here I heard your plea Gladly I give a kiss to thee A kiss of passion if I can ... Now pucker up and take it like a man !  And then again from me to you - Hope this kissy face will do !  Big smoooooooooches ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Your sincere plea sounds simple enough to me. The right kiss can move mountains and melt a heart. This is nicely written, James. Rainydays |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i will i will wait no geez i thought about replying yuh i will thats how convincing this fine poem is yuh yuh |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you all for your warm responses...James |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Another wonderful write James. I love how easily you can express yourself. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ah..this is so sweet... "...will you please consider kissing me..." who could resist such a tender, honest plea hugs, dg "so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you so much Marina and dg...James |
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