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A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03
Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2000-11-08 11:10 PM


Smoldering Passion

The heat of your
touch sets my
heart ablaze

your kiss, like
fuel to a fire
ignites an inferno
of desire within me

the taking of my body
at your hand, by
your heart, leaves me
in the afterglow of
of a passionate smolder…



Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul.

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Poeminister
Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada
1 posted 2000-11-09 12:55 PM


Whisper's carress, This is a Lovely poem.  Can feel much heat and passion in your words.




"...no single sound too rude
Upon thy slumber shall intrude,
Our thoughts, our souls- O God above!
In every deed shall mingle, love."
--Ed

A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03
Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale
2 posted 2000-11-09 12:46 PM


Poeminister,

Thank you for such a wonderful
response.  


Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2000-11-09 02:07 PM


Fear not my friend....I carry a fire extinguisher in my saddle bags.   Love the
thoughts behind this one.

A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03
Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale
4 posted 2000-11-09 08:30 PM


Mark  
fire extinguisher huh?

I like the idea of a single ice cube.
use your imagination. heehee


Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul.

Aimster
Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
5 posted 2000-11-09 08:44 PM


wow what passion and love lies in this!
precious little jewel you got here friend.
beautiful poem!

take care.
~amy~

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