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Stepping Out
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Stepping Out |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Stepping Out Into a cool morning, With the coming of Wynter, I am stepping out. In silent thought, halved Motionless, mind mysts of doubt Neither here nor there. Blocked, with no warning, A wall of frost awaits me, Once built through anguish To be taken down, Stone by stone, crumbling mortar Memories to "dust". Peace by piece, hopeful Of day's ending bringing warmth, I am stepping out. ~Wynter "Walks" "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 11-08-2000).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
nicely written hon..if i step out i better get some boots on in all this snow..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Wynter~ This is fantastic...I enjoyed this!! -SEA |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Much enjoyed this read my friend...much. jwesley |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~V~, please send it my way....I can't wait for that first pure white softness to land.  ~Wynter "Wishes" I shall walk through a sea of beautiful blue skies today...and breathe in some fresh air. Thank you ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Wynter, this is such a wonderful poem of hope and new beginnings. i am so gald for you. And that walk will bring wonders to your eyes. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
SEA- it makes me smile when you stop by, thank you jwesley- always happy to please Ron K.- yes, it was a lovely day here and I spent it entirely away from home... thank you for responding ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This was beautiful with more than one meaning that could be hidden within it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ A lovely piece with releasing warmth. You just keep on stepping out, gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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