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Shadows of our Love |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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The reflection of our love still lingers < !signature-->i wish it would go away the sound of your voice still whispers please stop it I have nothing to say the shadows of our love dances across the dance floor of my mind why cant my heart stop reminding me of another time stop tapping me on the shoulder to the tango of candlelight and wine i would rather be hurt without you then to be hurt with you in my life it is time to heal and let time say good bye then be hurt with an invisible knife.. Yes i will always love you but that is beside the point i have to heal my broken heart if only i could tenderly anoint You kept me in the dark a pearl, at the bottom of the sea if roles were reversed i would wear you upon a necklace for all the world to see so please heart stop tapping me on the shoulder reminding me of another time because this time i will ignore you like a million dollar baby in Woolworths.. five and dime A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 11-08-2000).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, Victoria... I loved the line: "....I would have worn you upon a necklace...." That is really fantastic in thought!! You did it again, girl!!  Follow your dream! |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Virginia this reminds me so much of a recent time. Very nicely done. Hope you break free of the ache. Rich |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"so please heart stop tapping me on the shoulder reminding me of another time" This is so tender and sorrowful Victoria, and yet so lovely and heartfelt. What a beautiful rendering!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Victoria-- tender and beautiful emotions wrapped up inside this piece. a poem that you have expressed quite lovely. really enjoyed this one! take care. ~amy~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sad, and beautifully written. I liked the choice of words throughout. Sandra |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Victoria, sometimes it's just as painful to let go as it is being let go. Beautiful verse as always. You're a pleasure to read. Best always, Ron. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Sunny..well its just a natural thing to do when you love someone..why keep them in the dark..unless you have a reason to hide them. nice to hear from you hon..glad you enjoyed. spiked..oh really ..you mean a recent event of yours?oh..must be something in the water haa..thanks rich kit..thank you kit..i appreciate your kind comments amy..thank you amy hon..you take care too Sandra..thank you sandra..just telling it like it is ha.. Ron..thank you ron..yes i think you are right..sometimes you have to think with your mind..it is always stronger then your heart.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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poetic_imperfection Junior Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 45 |
I have to say that I am sorry you feel this pain. From this pain look at what you have gined. A wonderful written poem. Loved the read. PW |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you for reading..hope you enjoy passions..appreciate your comments.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful sweet and tender yearning thoughts, a real pleasure to read...ethome |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you ethome ..i am happy you enjoyed..nice to hear from you.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I can feel your pain, you have expressed your feelings so well....love the way you paint your words for us and make it visable. (((warm hug))) Charisma |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved this!!!!!!!!!! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you so much for reading Charisma and vandana..i try to paint my canvas of words as true to life as i can.  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Victoria, of all the poems you've penned this one I must say is my all time favorite. The timing of my read probably has something to do with this but LadyVictoria, you touch my heart with this one. Thank you for writing and sharing this poem Coco |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
OOPSIE... me 4got 2 thread 2 library =) |
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