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What is this interloper?!?!?!?!?!?
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What is this interloper?!?!?!?!?!? |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What is this interloper that steals in silent as a cat and strikes swiftly as a viper? Tell me, what is this interloper that stalks surely as a hunting lion and as relentless as a pit bull? Oh, please, tell me, what is this interloper that evokes: laughter and tears, joy and despair, pleasure and pain, excitement and despondence, triumph and defeat, aspiration and apathy, and …. Hope? Always … hope. What name to give this … interloper? LOVE Love is. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Love comes and love goes. I do feel it is better to have loved and lost then never to have loved at all. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
awesome description of such a little rascal... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Indubitably. Well Written. "...no single sound too rude Upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." --Ed |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I really like how you set this up it's great! All the adjectives are very approriate just good writing I enjoyed it immensely..... take care...ethome |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
inot2B - I heard it was: Better to have loved a short man than never to have loved a tall.  )Sunshine - I appreciate your keeping my little part of the world warm an cozy. Poeminister - Welcomed approbation, thanx. Ethome - My first time to hear from you. Thank you for you time and reply. To all of you - Heartfelt thanks. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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