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A sigh for you
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A sigh for you |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
My delicate treasure, Within my arms I shall wrap you, Bury you within my heart, Forever safe. I am cannot fight the will to gaze with my longing eyes, Back into yours of green and brown flecks, forever lost, forever found. . I find my hands gently caressing ivory skin, Smooth as finest porcelain, Cast with angels in mind. My fingers will be lost within the tangle, Of hair of silken weave, Upon which I will set a crown of baby’s breath, Of sweet flowery perfume. And butterflies will dance about you, Robins of blue and red will sing for you, The sun will illuminate your beauty, Flowers will reach out to you, And as boughs of graceful trees bend in curtsy I will stand back in wonder, And sigh. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
forever lost, forever found. . I find my hands gently caressing ivory skin, Smooth as finest porcelain, Cast with angels in mind. My fingers will be lost within the tangle, Of hair of silken weave, Upon which I will set a crown of baby’s breath, Of sweet flowery perfume. And butterflies will dance about you, ==================== And as boughs of graceful trees bend in curtsy I will stand back in wonder, And sigh. ============= I hear a giant group forum *SIGH* about to be released on here... this is captivating and so well written romantic and sensually penned beautiful poetry Ron...truly jm |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I hear an echo.........**SIGH**  -SEA |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oopps! I sighed twice! -SEA[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 11-07-2000).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Ron K, This is superb, full of hearts sighs, I love it. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Sighfully, beautiful Ron..love the images you painted .. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
You say it so well! That line about butterflies...yup...precisely... KThe wind shifts like this: Like a human without illusions... This is how the wind shifts: Like a human, heavy and heavy, Who does not care. W.S |
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Highlander Member
since 2000-11-06
Posts 50Dundee, Scotland |
Ah, any woman would love to read this. I can learn much from the poets here! Andrew |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Ron, there's a quiet hush of sighs over here SIGHS...Coco... [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 11-07-2000).] |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Ron, very tender, sweet. Lovely. Rainy |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"I'll stand back in wonder and sigh"...yup! That's definetly an ace in the hole. I take it you've someone in mind... jwesley |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
This should definitely make points for you Ron... jwesley |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
And the sighs echo round the world, for another romantic poem.. Sandra |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Ron, this is incredibly beautiful.... certainly draw a sigh from this reader... Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very well done, sigher  |
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