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Never Meant To Be.......
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Never Meant To Be....... |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
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That night I met you I knew you were the one the one I'd always want yet never be able to hold It was almost audible the angels whisper........... telling me no, not this one you two aren't meant to be We've come close........ We almost could have been.......... I've seen the sparkle in your eye felt the passion in your kiss but never the warmth of your bed or your love ~ beyond friendship We were never meant to be........... Still sometimes....... I wonder if the angels were talking to you and I just happened ............to hear. -SEA- |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sea perhaps...James |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
So sad...sometimes things just aren't meant to be, no matter what we do. Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful SEA! What a great closing ... I loved your tender and questioning thoughts in this romantic piece, very nicely penned!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
How utterly beautiful ... What a turn of phrase ... Doubt put in words ... Love on hold ... You take my breath away. Love is. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SEA, this one made me go 'HMMMM...' And I must DITTO what Kit said above the ending is just exquisite Coco |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
That night I met you I knew you were the one the one I'd always want yet never be able to hold ============== Still sometimes....... I wonder if the angels were talking to you and I just happened ............to hear. =============== this is SO beautiful Sea ...so perfect like a whispered secret .. I know this very well ... the whispers of angels excellent... enchanting later-angel-eavesdropper-gator  jm |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ Maybe .... Elizabeth~ yes, funny how things work out any way Kit~ Hi! Wow, thank you  Interloper~ you are very sweet, thank you Coco~ thank you sweetie! -SEA |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Opps, sorry Janet, I didn't mean to forget you..... Thank you dear heart.....you make me feel so good! I think, if Janet likes this, then I did good -SEA |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Sea, whatever will be...will be...but when there's a trickle of hope...just a maybe...well, miracles do happen. Just listen for the answer in a whisper. shhh. you'll hear it. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is so sad and so beautiful! Perhaps my problem is I talk too much to hear the angels whisper. *G* Great job, SEA! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RonK~ there is no hope here, just an old ache that will never go away.....it's for my best friend..... well, my best friend other than my husband Suthern~ thank you for reading.....sometimes if you're still.....you can hear them whisper.....most of the time I'm too loud  hee hee I'm glad you liked this -SEA |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
SEA ~ Hmmmm, just maybe.....such a tender whisper.... Bonnie |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
SEA, (Circe) you knew before you even typed one letter what my reaction would be didn't you. Yes I know you did love, and it's true, this is wonderful, utterly utterly breathtakingly wonderful. I really love this one it's so amazing. Take care love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is a touching and heartfelt beauty of a poem. Sandra |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Bonnie~ thank you Mushy ~ thank you sweet friend! Sandra~ Thank you! -SEA ( Circe ) |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Wow, SEA. That was very emotional! Beautifully written! Loved it! sp I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Know the feeling well my friend; something that coulda, shoulda been, but never was and years and years later you still wonder why... Well done, said and in a lovely way... jwesley |
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azure Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 52 |
Wow SEA, this is great, you've reminded me of a favorite poem I'd like to share part of with you: "Say that I appeared in your life because someone wished it and you are not to blame and I will more than likely say the same." Loved the emotion in your poem, absolutely stunning! Azure "I put it down on paper and then the ghost does not ache so much" - Sandra Cisneros |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
SP~ thank you very much for reading JWesley~ my dear, you got it exactly... Azure~ I really like that poem, thank you for sharing it with me! -SEA |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Such tender words for a sad subject. Beautifully written, SEA. Dee I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
SEA, you have no idea how much these words apply to me...you took them right out of my mind. How'dyadothat??? |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Dee~ thank you Balladeer~ I'm so sorry you know this.....it rips at the heart, always wondering why not me? Thank you for reading -SEA |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh Susan - I relate all too well~ Melissa~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the last lines were the kicker...enjoyed this much |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh my...that last verse...what a thought |
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