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Highlander Member
since 2000-11-06
Posts 50Dundee, Scotland |
My blood is fueled to passion's rage I am awakened unto a quest to read the verse of page upon page of a hand, from whom I am blessed. For somewhere in this world, I believe is a poet who awakened my soul and yet I'm lost, so mercilessly for her words have silence stole I would fight the nobles hand to hand for another verse from thee I would travel sea and wave and land, for a chance to set you free. I lay siege for your heart and openly, as I visit the Abbey at dawn for the prayer I send will return to free the chains from this stifling bond. My heart twas a chamber dismembered each one had beat it's last Until you reassembled through verse, and the spell you cast. So, I wait, and I weep, for a Lady, swiftly filling my thoughts and my being and I flee from the fates that await me, hoping soon, your essence I feel Andrew |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Highlander~ this is stunning!! I sure do like the feel of this.....  -SEA |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Andrew! Welcome to Passions! This is amazing. I would normally "reply in kind" to a verse such as this, but unfortunately, I do not have the time. But I am going to really be looking forward to more of this type of work from you! Well done! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
with haste ye pull sword thy blood is fueled for naught retreat thy blade for war stolid from flesh tears of self peer not to yonder meadow for thief of thy goods turn eyes haste in, kindsir, seek thy light saysir? yes, i see thy shine yet, ye can'st peer to it know ye not where, 'tis core? |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
absolutely outstanding. Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My heart twas a chamber dismembered each one had beat it's last Until you reassembled through verse, and the spell you cast. So, I wait, and I weep, for a Lady, swiftly filling my thoughts and my being and I flee from the fates that await me, hoping soon, your essence I feel ================ this is exquisite and enchanting ... superb penning poet sir.. Welcome to passions ... you make quite a poetic first impression. take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Highlander, such gallantry! Such talent! I loved it. Dee I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Highlander, classic writing in phrase and form. very nicely delivered. Thank you ~ Rainydays |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Andrew~ A most charming and captivating piece...well done my friend Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I can relate on this one, you have expressed your feelings so well.....wonderful penned, and I will look forward for more....love it Charisma |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
...Andrew... What beautiful thoughts from a true heart such as yours! May your lady fly swiftly to your side, to inspire more poems such as this!!  Follow your dream! |
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Highlander Member
since 2000-11-06
Posts 50Dundee, Scotland |
Sea: I am happy you liked the "feel" of it. Thank you. Sunshine: Your reply is quite well received, thank you. Compassion: I thank you. Whisper: And you, so pleased you read. Janet Marie: How kind of you to reply, thank you. Dee: Gallantry is a gift for the right woman. Thank you. Rainydays: Thank you so much. Tracie: I'm pleased as well, that you found it captivating. Charisma: Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Sunny: Ah, but the lady does not respond to me, and yet I only see her from her words. But.....I shall continue on.< !signature--> Andrew [This message has been edited by Highlander (edited 11-10-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Andrew* This is so beautiful..rich in tenderness and longing. I'm sure the lady in which you speak of will soon be coming your way...because heartfelt words such as these cannot be ignored! Exquisite writing~ |
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