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A Screw Loose Here
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A Screw Loose Here |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
Follow me You will see A life riddled With insanity Take a breath Hold it in Let it out And let’s begin When you look Through your eyes All you’ll see Is my disguise But if you feel With your heart You’re the one It’s time to start Choose your God Plan your game Any will do They’re all the same Quiet now What was that? Knowledge is bad Don’t wear that hat Remember this No I can’t Looky here I begin to rant Out of my head You demons run You’re not welcome You’re no fun Oh dear God This is long I think I’ll stop And sing a song Sing sing song Song song sing Hear the notes They do ring What was that? I don’t know Look inside Ask your soul Are you live? Are you dead? Are you dreams? Inside my head Hear that noise It’s the end No it’s not Let’s start again Follow me You will see A life riddled With insanity Oh no stop Not again It is over This is the end One more thing Before I go OK I lied I’m on a roll Standing up I’m sitting down With out moving I run around Dreams I have Of all I’ve done What is this? There are none Drinking thoughts Of sounds I’ve read Tasting visions Of words you said A fly can’t bird A bird can fly Winnie the Pooh What a tripy guy Why are we here Or are we there Where are we going? Oh I don’t care What goes up Must come down Or in and out This world is round Watch up And listen out Do you understand? Must I shout? All is lost Reasons not known In this poem It’s clearly shown Love is the law, Love under will. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I'm afraid it wasn't clear to me!! But it was a lot of fun to read. Kathleen |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Ok I did understand Maybe insanity runs in the family.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Not only did I understand it...I loved it!! (uh oh...serenity understands you...be afraid..be very afraid..lol) Well done, m'friend. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
If serenity understands you, I have one word. . . RUN!!  This was excellent my friend. . . and I understood it too. . . I think. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
LOL where I come from this isnt called insanity its called living on the edge...heck who needs to understand just hang on for the ride...loved this Jeremy...ppssssssttttttt I do have a screwdriver tho if that helps HAHAHA [This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 11-10-2000).] |
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Unfamiliar Junior Member
since 2000-11-10
Posts 11 |
good poem better yet, good heart, still better yet, wonderful soul to be so caring.  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
want to run don't see fun what was that something mad I can see insanity I have fun I'd better run geez....this is fun.....like it a lot...though......  ((hugs)) Charisma |
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