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Victoria
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0 posted 2000-11-07 10:49 AM


Dream of me in the shadows of your mind
until  lullaby of your emotions
hauntingly addict you to me like wine

overwhelmed in the still of night
you wonder if you are dreaming
a prisoner in depths of moonlight

let me possess you, your body and soul
let me ravish you, as you lay
rendered helpless in my control

dream of me, tell me your fantasy
while you slumber and drift
upon violet dreams and ecstasy

until lips of dawn kisses gently with love
awakening on the wingspan of a dove

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A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)  



[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 11-07-2000).]

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SEA
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1 posted 2000-11-07 10:53 AM


Victoria~ SO beautiful! Enjoyed this.... -SEA
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2 posted 2000-11-07 11:12 AM


Victoria this is very seductive. Loved the poem.
Rich

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3 posted 2000-11-07 12:10 PM


Oh what a lovely dream Victoria!!!  "Violet dreams"....oh wow!  Bonnie
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4 posted 2000-11-07 12:34 PM


~Well Victoria,...this is simply delicious of you. hehe. Marvelous journey here, thank you. *Peace.
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5 posted 2000-11-07 01:25 PM


SEA..thank you..and for peeking in

Rich..Glad you liked rich..thank you for reading..

Bonnie..nice of you to stop by bonnie..thanks for visiting..

Spitfire..Im so glad you enjoyed..thank you for taking time to read..


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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6 posted 2000-11-07 01:33 PM


mmmmmmm. . . I really like this one Victoria. . . very haunting and seductive. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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7 posted 2000-11-07 01:33 PM



Victoria, sensual and passionate hmm I enjoyed this read

Coco

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8 posted 2000-11-07 03:36 PM


Sven..thank you for reading..and peeking in thru my shutters ha..

CoCo..Nice to hear from you too and so glad you enjoyed.... appreciate your comments.

                  ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Wilfred Yeats
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9 posted 2000-11-07 04:11 PM


VERY WARN PIECE
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10 posted 2000-11-07 04:16 PM


"Let me ravish you as you lay
rendered helpless in my control."
You and I share the same dream...James

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11 posted 2000-11-07 05:28 PM


Bill..always face your fears haa..

James..well maybe ill bump into you sometime in one of my dreams haa..

                ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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12 posted 2000-11-07 05:32 PM


Victoria, not only sensual and seductive, but this piece is so pretty, especially when read aloud. Lovely writing, thank you ~

Rainydays

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13 posted 2000-11-07 06:22 PM


Victoria....
     This really is written by a true romantic heart.....it's wonderful, but then again..I'm a dedicated fan!!!!! Love all of yours!!!!  


Follow your dream!


Victoria
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14 posted 2000-11-07 07:50 PM


Raindays...im so glad you liked it enough to read it aloud ...a good idea indeed..thank you very much for visiting ...

Sunny..thank you my dedicated fan ha..as i am one of yours too...nice to hear from you today..

                 ~Victoria~

              


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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