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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Dream of me in the shadows of your mind < !signature-->until lullaby of your emotions hauntingly addict you to me like wine overwhelmed in the still of night you wonder if you are dreaming a prisoner in depths of moonlight let me possess you, your body and soul let me ravish you, as you lay rendered helpless in my control dream of me, tell me your fantasy while you slumber and drift upon violet dreams and ecstasy until lips of dawn kisses gently with love awakening on the wingspan of a dove A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 11-07-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Victoria~ SO beautiful! Enjoyed this....  -SEA |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Victoria this is very seductive. Loved the poem. Rich |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh what a lovely dream Victoria!!! "Violet dreams"....oh wow! Bonnie |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Well Victoria,...this is simply delicious of you. hehe. Marvelous journey here, thank you. *Peace. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
SEA..thank you..and for peeking in  Rich..Glad you liked rich..thank you for reading.. Bonnie..nice of you to stop by bonnie..thanks for visiting.. Spitfire..Im so glad you enjoyed..thank you for taking time to read.. A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
mmmmmmm. . . I really like this one Victoria. . . very haunting and seductive. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Victoria, sensual and passionate hmm I enjoyed this read Coco |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Sven..thank you for reading..and peeking in thru my shutters ha..  CoCo..Nice to hear from you too and so glad you enjoyed.... appreciate your comments.~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
VERY WARN PIECE |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Let me ravish you as you lay rendered helpless in my control." You and I share the same dream...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Bill..always face your fears haa.. James..well maybe ill bump into you sometime in one of my dreams haa.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Victoria, not only sensual and seductive, but this piece is so pretty, especially when read aloud. Lovely writing, thank you ~ Rainydays |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Victoria.... This really is written by a true romantic heart.....it's wonderful, but then again..I'm a dedicated fan!!!!! Love all of yours!!!!  Follow your dream! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Raindays...im so glad you liked it enough to read it aloud ...a good idea indeed..thank you very much for visiting ... Sunny..thank you my dedicated fan ha..as i am one of yours too...nice to hear from you today.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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