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| Open Poetry #10 |
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Velvet Whispers |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648
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You gently wrap yourself around each thought Caressing every corner of my mind Warm velvet whispers echo love I’d sought Down through the years yet never dreamed I’d find. You breathe my name in songs of pure desire We blend in perfect harmony and rhyme Each chord reverberates to lift us higher To drift above constraints of space and time. We melt, become as one, much more than two One voice, one heart, one soul, forevermore We’ll sing this melody ‘till life is through Together we’ve composed the grandest score. Warm velvet whispers echo endlessly Our lovers’ song will play unendingly. Denise *This was inspired by a song entitled 'Better On This Side' on my nephew's newly released CD, 'John Condron - My Own Device', and, of course, dedicated to my husband!* |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ I was waiting for this - you are right ... the forum is alive with romantic tributes of love. This is lovely. I love the very sound of velvet. Congrats to John for his CD and for inspiring you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Dee, Such a loving tribute to your hubby, and a very loving poem. Thanks for sharing with us. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Then we know how beautiful the song is don't we  when music speaks to your soul and inspires beauty such as this...excellent writing Denise~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
this is very beautiful Denise, a lovely tribute to your husband "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I do so love a sonnet from you ... this is lovely and full of harmony Denise and what a gorgeous title ... superb writing lucky guy  jm |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
beautifully written Denise..and will have to listen for the cd.. cant wait to hear it.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
O my goodness..congratulations...to ALL of you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Awesome that your nephew has released a CD! And your poem is a stunning expression of love. May you and your husband celebrate many happy years together! Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Now THERE is one lucky husband!!! Denise, this is beautiful.....! |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
I agree with Balladeer, What a lucky husband. Fantastic write. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Denise, This is soft and romantic, very loving. I loved reading it. Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I'm envious! Love the picture! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
so tender and beautiful...loved it!! ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very beautiful, as only a "Denise sonnet" could be. A warm and tender tribute to your husband and your nephew. Congratulations to him for his CD and to you for this lovely sonnet Liz |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Lovely, warm, and touching. jwesley |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Lovely, warm, and touching. jwesley |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
This was beautiful.......a warming read for the heart. Jenn E |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very sweet words..James |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a beautiful tribute to your husband Denise ... you speak of a deep and endless love that warms the heart, just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
***oops*** [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 11-05-2000).] |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you so much, Marge, Ron, Butterflies, Maree, Janet Marie, Victoria, Karilea, Elizabeth, Balladeer, Daniel, A Whisper's Caress, Kathleen, Wynter, Elizabeth, James, Jenn, James and Kit for reading and for your wonderful replies! I am very fortunate to have the husband that I have! I guess eventually I had to get it right...hehehe...and my nephew's CD is fabulous! I wish you all could hear it! I'm very proud of him! He wrote the lyrics and the music. Also he does the vocals and plays the guitar. He has such a beautiful voice. When he was younger he was in the world renowned Philadelphia All Boys Choir. I'm sure the more I listen to the CD, I'll be inspired to write more poetry! Thanks again, everybody! Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 11-05-2000).] |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
"We’ll sing this melody ‘till life is through Together we’ve composed the grandest score" ~~ love this Denise, how very pretty and tender, your poem. I enjoyed reading it, and like all the musical references. What a divine way to say "I love you." Rainydays |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Rainydays! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Denise |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Denise--I'm so glad that I found this lovely poem...It is beautifully done and full of loving thoughts! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"You gently wrap yourself around each thought Caressing every corner of my mind" GOOD STUFF, DENISE!! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Denise this is a very beautiful piece...well done and congrats to your nephew Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
yuh great job i say very talented but yuh knew that o yuh |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Absolutely beautiful!!! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
DS... beautiful Coco |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Martie, Nan, Tracie, Walt, Suthern and Coco for reading and for your lovely replies! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! Denise |
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