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Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

0 posted 2000-11-06 11:10 PM

Vespers of a setting sun,
...as calm on land befalls,
Quiets bustle of the day,
...a loon to darkness calls,
Evening paints a sunset,
...across sky's western face,
I soar above on winds of time,
...on wings of feathered grace,
With the birthing of the night,
...the sky erupts ablaze,
A million twinkling stars above,
...hearken heaven's praise,
Reflected on the plains below,
...the glow of moon's first light,
Unfettered wings of angel's grace,
...I soar into the night,
Past the starry sentinels,
...Orion's muted cry,
Luna's orb in majesty,
...across night's cloudless sky.
Solemn silence cloaks the night,
...nature in repose,
Evening's breeze in noiseless hush,
...upon the earth bestows,
Eternal benediction,
...as man and beast are one,
Immortal absolution,
...as final day is done.

[This message has been edited by Mike (edited 11-06-2000).]

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-11-06 11:23 PM

Mike~
This is a keeper.
What absolute beauty you've written.

'Eternal benediction,
...as man and beast are one,
Immortal absolution,
...as final day is done.'

This is some fine writing.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

2 posted 2000-11-06 11:58 PM

Mike*
I'm honestly in awe...this was magnificent!
The imagery and the flow of this piece took
my breath away...I had to read it several
times just to let the full beauty sink
in...and I'm sure I'll read it many many
more times just for the sheer
pleasure...Thank you for sharing this
awesome piece of weave~

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2000-11-07 12:43 PM

Oh Mike...no one paints the night like you do...exquisite!

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 2000-11-07 07:21 AM

Magnifique!!

Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

5 posted 2000-11-07 02:22 PM

Marge...somehow I suspect you're a keeper. *smile* thank you so much.
Butterflies... I do not know how to respond to such a kind and gracious reply. So I will simply say thank you ever so much.
Martie...thank you muchly for the exquisite..
Nan...*smile*

EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

6 posted 2000-11-07 02:40 PM

When I read your work I can only look on in awe! Excellent!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

Rainydays
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since 2000-10-21

Posts 324

7 posted 2000-11-07 03:10 PM

Mike, a classic piece of writing. Your skill is most apparent, and most lovely. Thank you for allowing the rest of us to enjoy your work.

Rainydays

Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

8 posted 2000-11-07 10:33 PM

EagleOne and Rainydays... I appreciate the responses very much... as those who read me know... behind roses... the night is my favorite subject to pen on...

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

9 posted 2000-11-10 07:27 PM

I needed to read this today. It's beautiful...though that word does little to describe how it touched me. Thank you.

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