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Hold Me
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Hold Me |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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Hold Me Hold me just for one night. Let me know that all is right. That love is not defined by pain. That loneliness will not remain. Sex is not that which I crave. To satisfy my needs to save. These thoughts that run inside my head Consuming all that I contend Will give me solace from this need Relief from that which makes me bleed So hold me for just this one night Let me know that all is right. That I can love without the pain And happiness will then remain. With me. |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
I love this one. I think it's becvause I understand it all to well. good job spiked n good luck. hope someone shows you  and me |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I KNOW. Hugs...and hey..."dream sweet." |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
If you need to be held, please hold the other passionately and show that you really care. All too often it is one way |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Sometimes something as simple as a hug relieves worries, Thanks Rich |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Yep,Just that warm embrace can mean more than a night filled with sex. The human touch(hugs) can make anyone feel better. |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
How true and touching and heartfelt this is, not to mention how close it hits to home as well. Wonderfully expressed and great writing as well. Excellent. Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
(((((((((okay))))))))))) couldn't resist I miss your voice. I miss the bliss.......... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
*HUGS* well said spiked understand very well what you are saying Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you all so very much I feel as though i have been bleesed with all of your cyber hugs Rich |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Well how about one more? Or as many more that you need? You say this so well...the need for a tender touch far outweighs the momentary pleasure of a sexual encounter... Don't close your eyes to the possibilities |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SPIKED, me likez how you thinkNwrite Splendid read my PoetFriend Coco 2 the library this one goes  |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
To be held and find the comfort in another's embrace...just letting the world go by...I think I got swept away in this...lol Great writing Rich~ |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you very much Butterflies. Some things come from the heart. Rich |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Sorry paula and coco Thank both of you 2. Nice to have it bought back forward Thanks Rich |
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