Open Poetry #10 |
You and Your Brain |
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
You and Your Brain, FAQ The mind is fallacious, often misplacing crucial data, sealing off records marked "Important!" On occasion, it mimics the human sense of humor – once the REM sleep phase has been entered, it abruptly restores the dossier, pasting news flashes across the insides of lids. This results in sudden onset of wakefulness and general amazement to the recipient. It should be noted that if not retained in writing, the data may be lost. When emotions rule this sector, damage to the psyche may occur, systems overload, then flood unwanted memories, emotions such as sadness or anger may be triggered, along with possible production of saline. Dreams perform system management of thought processes, especially those ignored during waking hours, exploring that which beings fantasize about or fear most. In biochemical nature, it is diametrically opposed to C2H60 and countless other natural and synthetic pharmaceuticals. If cared for properly, (and if chromosomes do not contain contaminated DNA) the brain should function normally for many years to come. © 2000 Corinne Bailey [This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 11-06-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This one definitely caught my eye...Found it very reasurring somehow--until the end. Now, could you do a follow up on The Proper Care Of The Brain? rofl...truly enjoyed this one, Corinne!!! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wow!! you little brain doctor you....I'm just sitting here so scared to death of contaminated DNA well what can I do to uncontaminate it?? Higher levels of seretonin or what.....this was put together quite cleverly....I really enjoyed it!!....ethome |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Serenity! Guess I could follow up with one that reads: Care and Maintenance of Your Brain: Handle With Care! Ethome, higher levels of seratonin may be dangerouls to your health, stimulating the pleasure point of the brain, leading to, um, well, you know! Thanks! Corinne |
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Highlander Member
since 2000-11-06
Posts 50Dundee, Scotland |
You made reading about ones brain intriging! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks Highlander! Corinne |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
corinne this is absolut wait a minute absolut aint for the brain ok starting over this was just budweiser!!! woohoo i loved it great inventiveness |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Corinne~ This is SO creative!! What a great poem.......lots of fun to read! -SEA |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
~big smile~ - most inventive - great write |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Corinne, What a great write, well done. Yeah, the brain is complex. It is only if we allow others to manipulate our thoughts that we are not in control. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks, Walt, Sea, Wilfred and Daniel! Had fun with it, still editing, too. Seems my brain doesn't think this thing is quite done! Corinne |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
well how do you do it gal? so glad I caught this little jewel going out the door...you made me smile bigtime & in case it wasn't meant to be funny, then please wait in the corner with one of Ron's till I can figure out the translation#?! really enjoyed |
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