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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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There is a gust of wind blowing the branches to and fro Outside my windows dogwoods are screaming Oh No  Old man winter is pruning too much..as the winds blow Snipping here and there broken limbs everywhere Bad hair day in store for blooming leaves A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Bad hair day indeed Victoria!!!  Sounds like Dorothy and Toto will be flying by soon. Love it. Bonnie |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
ha..thank you Bonnie..hold on to your hat  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Oh, you made me smile! Lovely way to describe the winds of autumn. We don't have dogwoods here - I'll have to go look up a picture. Nice! Nice! Bad hair day for the trees - !!!!! |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Bad hair day in store for blooming leaves Victoria, I love the humor in this piece, such a fresh way at looking at winter's arrival. Robert Joseph |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Love the images you created; I can see the wind now (we get plenty of wind here, but no dogwoods  sigh: Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I do like it when you get light-hearted ~S~ Good one V |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Rosemary..thank you..im happy I made you smile..and where is that lucky man of yours haa..  Robert..See im not romantic all the time ..thank you Robert..nice of you to stop by.. Peppermint..Dogwoods are pretty .. i like the white and pink ones...glad you enjoyed Wil..are you saying you want me to start sending you jokes..instead of writing poems ..I dont think so..haa...just kidding..thanks billy A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
BAd hair days wind and rain.. winter does not seem to have any virtues at all... wonderful poem Victoria "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
LOVE these lines.... "Bad hair day in store for blooming leaves" "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Brian and Kathleen..nice to hear from you both today..have a great weekend. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Victoria this was too fun. That last line was a killer...lol...Loved every line girl. Love & hugs, Juls |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Juls..so glad you peeked in today..happy you liked.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
Victoria, This is excellent and my treat to read. Thanks, |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you very much compassion..and for sending it back around.. ha..glad you liked ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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