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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2000-11-06 07:50 AM



Seeing how
Whatever I see
Becomes a Tootsie Roll to me
I must step back from the crowd
And reassess my life

My wife declares my obsession
I step back from her and cry
Tootsie Roll how I love
Your chocolatey chew
Tootsie Roll I think
I'm in love with you

Whatever it is I think I see
Becomes an irrational chain of events
Or maybe a tootsie roll to me

I said to Mister Owl as he snapped a groovy beat
It’s a gas, man Tootsie Rolls are all I want to eat
Mister Owl said to me brother don’t you wag
Your Tootsie Roll fix is just a quarter a bag

Mister Owl if you have an answer I'll think your tops
How many licks to the center of a Tootsie Roll Pop
Mister Owl said well just let me see
He peeled off the wrapper and said 1…2…3

But officer he looked like a Tootsie Roll to me




[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 11-06-2000).]

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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2000-11-06 07:54 AM


LOL! Oh Walt, you get me every time! Boy did you bring back some memories, I can still picture that Owl going "a'one, ttwo ... tthrree" ... thanks for the smiles with this sweet verse!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

azure
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2 posted 2000-11-06 10:54 AM


Wow, you've zapped me back to 1983 with this one, what a great (and funny!) poem.  Thanks for putting a smile on my face.  

Azure
"I put it down on paper and then the ghost does not ache so much" - Sandra Cisneros

Rainydays
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3 posted 2000-11-06 11:23 AM


Walt, been sneakin' into the Halloween candy??    Loved this!

Rainydays

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4 posted 2000-11-06 11:28 AM


Walty- you crack me up....keep em coming!!

Sissy

wayoutwalt
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5 posted 2000-11-06 01:42 PM


thank you tootsie boys and girls yuh
elisaseyes
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6 posted 2000-11-07 09:47 AM


This is his wife and the candy although in  low supply is stashed somewhere well... else.
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7 posted 2000-11-07 09:57 AM


Walt~ I think you've had something a bit stronger than candy LOL this is fantastic.... -SEA
vlraynes
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8 posted 2000-11-08 09:40 PM



Walt-
   see what you've gone and done...
   now i'm gonna have to go buy
   a bag of tootsie rolls! lol  
   this is too funny...i love it!  
   thanks for the laugh.  

   -vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Ron K. Fox
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9 posted 2000-11-08 09:48 PM


Wait a minute now, what was in the center of your tootsie roll pop? yuh da bestest

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox



Nan
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10 posted 2000-11-09 06:54 AM


Just POPS?... Not Tootsie Rolls themselves???..
Butterflies_dont_cry
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11 posted 2000-11-09 07:52 AM


Do they make Tootsie Roll Coffee???? oooooH
Yuh! LOL...loved it w.o.w.~

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12 posted 2000-11-09 08:58 PM


LOL! So, you too have a tootsie roll addiction, eh? Maybe you and my husband should get therapy for that! I have to fight him over the Orange and the Rasberry Tootsie Roll pops!

Adorable poem, Walt! I love it!

wayoutwalt
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13 posted 2000-11-09 09:01 PM


the whole she-bang nanners all o em from the rasberries i took from temtys hubby to the pops that go weasel
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