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| Open Poetry #10 |
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Strings of Wind Guitar |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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I see the reflections of stars in your eyes Beneath lilac heavens in the Texas skies Strings of wind guitar strums to coyote songs two shadows in moonlight dancing until dawn haunting is the music within the Marfa lights you my Texas cowboy in your cowboy hat of white only sound of spurs upon blanket on the sand jingle jangle music echos to the Rio Grande < !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-13-2000).] |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
hey you mean to tell me Victoria that you have real cowboys living in Amarillo and never told me about them??? ...darn I will have to make that trip out there to visit you soon... ~~soft hugs, hon Maureen *I enjoyed the write..  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Last time i looked hon haa...yes you will have to come visit real soon..actually this poem was written a few months ago..and i just came across it..i was going to write with a friend in Grande Praire and i think he got sidetracked or something and forgot all about me haa..found a cute little cowgirl down there i guess..anyway..thanks Maureen..glad you stopped by..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Hi temptress..nice of you to say..what is a temptress doing home on a friday night? haa..just teasing.. A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good morning Victoria, I can hear that guitar stumming, as I play one myself, or I play at it. Glad I stopped to read your writing. Bill |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Bill..and for sending the poem back around again..i thought it would probably be lost by the time I woke up haa.. Glad you enjoyed.. ~Victoria~< !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-14-2000).] |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Lovely piece. But one question? Cowboys really do it with their boots on? *giggles* |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Well since im not a real cowgirl..im sorry to say i dont know.. haa...only lived in Texas eight years...im from the east..thank you kitkat..nice to hear from you.. ~Victoria~< !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-14-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a lovely, melodic piece Victoria ... seems Texas is the place to be! Cowboys, guitars, romance, and those spurs ... I enjoyed this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Kit...so glad you enjoyed..nice to hear from you..I was brought up In the east and lived in Hawaii before coming to Texas.. I enjoy new places...but Delaware is my home..where my family is and also pennsylvania and New Jersey... not to mention being born in England haa...~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Okay so you have the good part of Texas down in Amarillo....here in Houston we have concrete and asphalt ranges and four "WHEELED" coyotes howling at the smog ridden sky....wanna trade? LOL wonderful write from you. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Yes, and dont forget the tornados too Mark.. but whats nice about Amarillo is that im closer to Vegas then you are haa...i love it there..I also lived in El Paso..miss the mexican food..its good here but not like El Paso..so glad you took the time to read Mark..and btw..and if i find those fuzzy slippers ill make sure they have spurs on them haa..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is a very beautiful piece you have here Vikkie! Thanks for sharing! Nathan |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Nate Dogg..kind of you to say..thanks for peeking in today.. im so glad you like it..A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Victoria, like cowboys who don't need to say much, this poem jangled it's way 'cross my brain in sound and verse... I enjoyed it very much! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you so much Sunshine..i thought this one was gone with the tumbleweeds. haa... ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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