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Untitled Affections - An Ode to a Special Friend ...
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Untitled Affections - An Ode to a Special Friend ... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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Untitled Affections Walk with slow steady steps And keep walking, my friend, Speak out in simple smiles And keep talking, dear friend. Just hold on to my hands Whenever you feel the need, And lean on my shoulders When you quiver like a reed. Stich the threads of your life Feeling comfort and joy, Fly through silver-tipped clouds And wade through painted skies. Tie the sapphire beads of love And break away from solitude, Unshackle your soul from pain And let in the light of prelude. And then let's make music In each other's caring arms, And let's sing those love songs That keep winter hearts warm. Hey friends, sorry for being the runaway tramp again, but all I have as free time is about 15 minutes in a tiresome winter day... and as much as I want to be back here, things are getting more and more difficult... I appreciate all your well-wishes and kind gestures.... I hope to find a way to return back all the caring that all you friends have given me so far... Sincere Regards, Sudhir. [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 11-06-2000).] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sudhir~ What a precious piece of poetry you have penned....great write my friend, well done  Take care ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
As long as you drop in from time to time and sprinkle gems like this for us to read from your pen...this is so beautiful...the arms of a friend are the only safe place to lay...absolutely perfect~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's not the same without you, so hurry home soon... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
aH, Sudhir, you have been missed. And your gentle spirit shines through in this piece. Take care, friend, and I pray that your load lightens soon!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Your writing is an olive branch But comes on like an avalanche. Well done my friend. Sy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Stich the threads of your life Feeling comfort and joy, Fly through silver-tipped clouds And wade through painted skies. Tie the sapphire beads of love And break away from solitude, Unshackle your soul from pain And let in the light of prelude. And then let's make music In each other's caring arms, And let's sing those love songs That keep winter hearts warm. ============== this is wonderful Sud... superb imagery kissed with your sincere sentiments... so great to see your name here no apologies needed visit when you can later-we-miss-you-much-gator  jm |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sudhir, Sudhir beloved one, this is an absolute treasure, a keeper for sure. *HuGS* Be well Come back soon Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sudhir-What a lovely piece from you. I always treasure the times when I see your name up here as you know. You don't need to worry about how much time you have to spend with us. Just a little peek in from you especially when they are verses as wonderful as this is enough. We will be here for you when you get back just as we are now. Take care my friend. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sudhir good to see your name up there I was wondering where the heck you were....just got back here myself after a long absence and I am enjoying it as much as ever...this is a wonderful warm piece you have penned here and you have'nt lost your touch at all. Whenever you can find the time to drop in please do so. I look forward to reading your work..... ethome |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
good to read you once more, my friend ... i hope all is well with you ... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sudhir~ you are missed while you are away....this is so lovely! Hope to see more of you as time allows........ -SEA |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sudhir....we are blessed with whatever time you have to share with us |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
A beautiful way to say Hello Again, my friend. jwesley |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sudhir--This poem is a treasure from your heart...and it is priceless...hope to see you again soon...you are missed! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is lovely, Sudhir... and just keep on returning whenever you can - We're happy to see you..  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ Please tiptoe through anytime you have a gem like this one to leave for us to enjoy. Lovely thoughts. Take care and bless you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
cool beans that you had time to post this sudhir good job yuh made smile |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thanks for taking time to visit with this wonderful poem. Hope to see you again soon Liz |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
Sudhir, Hurry back, your missed! You left us with a little honey. Thanks. |
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