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A promise of man |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... 
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A promise of man See now, they gather! Yearning, learning Filled with hope, Promise and desire Our youth untainted! See now, they gather! Playing, dreaming Filled with endless Vision And impossible dreams Our future, unrestrained! See now, they gather! Creating, building Free thinking souls Our future dwellers Guardians of the human race "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Eagle* Your writing has reached a new level..your work has a quality that speaks to the reader...this is fantastic work my friend. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EagleOne~ Oh, what a fine tribute to the youth of the land. Hope-promise-desire ... those are three terrific traits. I've always been a youth supporter ... they do have visions to behold. With a little luck and a lot of dedication they will make this place a better one. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent Eagle. . . this shows that we hold the promise in our hands. . . What will we pass on to them? Makes you think. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very cool poem Eagle ... I like the message you intend here ... they indeed are the promise of the future you poem reminded me of a verse from an old favorite Jackson Browne song..... later-wise-down-under-gator Some of them were dreamers, some of them were fools Who were making plans and thinking of the future With the energy of the innocent, they were gathering the tools They would need to make their journey back to nature While the sand slipped through the opening And their hands reached for the golden ring With their hearts they turned to each other's hearts for refuge In the troubled years that came before the deluge Before the Deluge frome the cd Late From the Sky |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, how I love it when I read something that gives me thoughts to ponder. You've done that and more here EagleOne ... a wonderful tribute to our youth, may they lead us wisely.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Hi "E"...what a great read..this is a very thought provoking poem...seeing our youth for what they truly are...our future...our promise of immortality...wonderful Don't close your eyes to the possibilities |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I take it that you were not at a Marilyn Manson show recently...(just kidding! *wink*) Seriously, I've a son that's just becoming a young man, and anybody who knows me, knows how proud I am of him...this poem made me feel like that...I thank you, Eagle!!! (He's really a terrific kid, and next time you have a few hours, I'll tell ya about him!!!) |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~E,...you know, you're just such a joy to read. Really. The things you express here reach me and I like that,...what an interesting topic to write about. YOU are an observant poet. *Peace you. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
a very heartwarming poem Eddie..and we should take notice... nicely written~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Eagle One, a lovely poem that's young at heart and sensitive of spirit. be well Keth Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Eagle One~ This is wonderful...it should be a poster....enjoyed this! -SEA |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Butterfly......Being able to get the feeling across always brings a smile to me. Thankyou my my dear friend because you always know. Take care!Marge........Hope, promise, and desire are things we seem to have as youths but find it hard to hold onto as we grow. If we can hold on to those it will be a better place for all. Sven....alway a pleasure to have you read my work, thanks for stopping by. Janet.....mmm...So now I'm a wise old poet, eh! but then so too is Jackson Browne I guess LOL. Thanks for reading, you know how much I appreciated your comments. Kit...I'm so glad to be able to stir your thoughts. I like to think if we lead them wisely they will repay the favour. Thanks for stopping in to add your comment.Paula.....So glad you enjoyed! and yes they are all that , and more. serenity.....Always an honour to have you stop in to read my work. LOL @ Marilyn Manson, though it might have been my daughter you saw there . You will need a few hours because I will tell you all about mine too!  SpitFire.....It is a joy to know my words have reached you my friend, take care! Victoria...Always a pleasure to know you have read something of mine, thanks for your valued comment. Kethry......I thankyou for your wonderful comments. Sea....It is wonderful to know you enjoyed reading this, thankyou! I don't know about a poster but I am looking for a tee shirt slogan < !signature--> "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. [This message has been edited by EagleOne (edited 11-06-2000).] |
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The Poetic Plumber Junior Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 38 |
A great poem about our future adults. Wow! I really enjoyed reading that. Roger |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
See now, they gather! Creating, building Free thinking souls Our future dwellers Guardians of the human race EagleOne~ I love this, it is a fantastic piece...well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Roger.....glad you enjoyed. thanks for stopping by, and welcome to passions. Tracie......Always so nice to have your wonderful comments. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
Hi EOne, This is a very nice write. (oops, it went away). You had me going in one direction then shazam! you delievered me to our children. VERY good write. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
compassion.......Thankyou for your kind reply. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Eagle One, I admire how you've expressed the promise of our young folks. A swell poem, thank you ~ Rainydays |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Rainydays.....I thankyou for reading and for your comments. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This carries in the lines a freedom almost like a butterfly lift! I thought it was inspirational. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Kathleen......It is an honour to have you read and comment on my work. Also, my belated congratulations on your recent milestone. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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