Open Poetry #10 |
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My Garden |
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GreyMouser Junior Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 17 |
The garden deep within my heart has long since gone to seed. The little spot were love grew tall is overgrown with weed. No one to water, till the soil and trim the stems so neat. So many lonely years have passed it now doth barely beat. The pretty pots which bloomed with trust are emptied weathered stone. Neglected for so long a time they sit there all alone. Dark creeping vines of age and gloom have covered 'oer the walls, and shut out light that beamed so bright on flowers large and small. The thistles bristling thorns of woe and nettles hurtful sting, were planted there by broken dreams and nights spent suffering. And so my garden waits for one to see how once it grew, pull up the nasty vines and weeds and plant true love anew. To sprinkle my parched dried out soul with gentle drops of rain, and wash away the dust and sand in which grew bitter pain. One day someone will finally come to weed and rake and hoe, for her the sweetest, reddest rose my garden then will grow. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
get out those gardening tools! Lovely poem Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I DO love this---in fact, my own garden is in much the same disarray...I think it is time to hoe and mulch it over. Thanks for this one, mouser. |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
another fantastic poem Mike..With a beautiful ending..loved it.. ![]() ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Excellent thought...you've woven the perfect weave of a heart in need of TLC..Welcome to Passions..your talent is easily noticed and will be a joy to receive here. Terrific writing~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
The thistles bristling thorns of woe and nettles hurtful sting, were planted there by broken dreams and nights spent suffering. And so my garden waits for one to see how once it grew, pull up the nasty vines and weeds and plant true love anew. absolutely beautiful words...you express yourself so nicely ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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