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eyesplus2
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since 2000-03-02
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0 posted 2000-11-06 02:58 AM


Forever

A Day as close as yesterday
As Far as tomorrow

A Moment between heartbeats........
A Heartbeat of moments........

A Wish on a full moon night.......
An I Love you........

A Dream given life with a kiss......
A Kiss given a dream...........

A Life together.....Forever


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Dee
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since 2000-08-19
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1 posted 2000-11-06 03:08 AM


A beautiful thought!
Dee


I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2000-11-06 04:57 AM


Nice format with a beautiful thought behind it......ethome
Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
3 posted 2000-11-06 07:26 AM


This is so beautiful...the thoughts and the
emotion that you were able to weave in just
a few lines is amazing to me...It takes me
pages to attempt to say this much! Excellent
work and the format was perfect!


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