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He Said and She Said (boring and interesting)
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
He Said and She Said (he said) "I really like you a lot even though we have known each other for only a few days and someday we might get married but not right away." (she said) "Hey don't ever forget we've only just met and so far have only done a lunch or two and I have enjoyed sharing the pleasure of some movies with you. Take it easy my friend and let the feeling sink in." (he said) "Oh I didn't mean we should get married right away. You know in six months or even a year we'll see where things go from here. What do you think about that my dear?" (she said) "Perhaps, but don't push it, go real slow and give me some time to give it a stay or go." (he said) "Sounds good to me, I sure hope we can give it a good go cause I like you a lot you know. By the way do you like me?" (she said) "What do you think?" (he said) "Wait a minute that was a question begging for an answer." (she said) "Would I call someone I didn't like? No! I'd simply tell him to take a hike." (he said) "What do you think?" (she said) "Why do we talk in rhyme all the time?" (he said) "The answer to that question is very clear my dear. Of course only a poet would know it." Jameslee@November05,2000 Hope I haven't driven anyone crazy reading this...just thinking about the importance of communication in a relationship...how we say really silly things sometime and we need to talk things over and become friends...communication is very significant in the development of a relationship..sometimes one or the other is very emotionally unavailable and we only seem to be talking in circles or to ourselves. Or is this just me? |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Its a wonder James that I dont talk in rhyme..all of the time haa..enjoyed.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I think we've all spent time on that merry-go-round! Great poem, James! Denise |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
James, it's just you. (KIDDING!!) I love what you're saying here, that is, if I'm "hearing" you correctly! Seriously, James, you are absolutely right. Communication must be carefully minded in order to attain true understanding with another. I like the way you've written this, and sorry for the teasing. (((hugsforyou))) Rainydays |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
James, I love this, as for communication you're asking the wrong person, I work in communication, spend all my time talking and not in circles either. Still you are right there's a lot of lost links in the communication chain. Great poem James I really do like this one. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
James-- this is wonderful. and i agree. communication is the key. without it a relationship surely can't survive. and it is funny sometimes what pops up in convo  take care. great write!!amy |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
James, you're learning my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Yep. A good description of a silly and sometimes odd communication. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Yep. A good description of a silly and sometimes odd communication. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
LOL friend...the only problem is...are you hearing whats really being said? Or are you hearing just what you want to hear? I know I am guilty of that at times...great write |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Victoria, Denise, Rainydays, Marsha, Amy, Sven, temptress and Paula. Rainydays I love teasing unless a kiss is involved...then I want the real thing. Paula I would say I have been guilty of that...but I also am a good listener and I listen to what my heart is telling me...James |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
JAMES!! My goodness-I can do these!!! LOL, LOL, don't run off my feller, ya'hear? btw, I like your dialogbetter than some others I've heard, (did I say hear?)...read, that's the word I'm looking for!! later. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ you simply melt my heart.......you are so loving, so sweet, understanding, and wow....so much more......you blow me away.....any woman would be LUCKY to be with you, to say the least.....you are beyond romantic....It's just who you are. Hugs -SEA |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
Please have a look see what Amy said.....lol my sides are hurting....really funny amy. |
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