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Of Travel And Journey
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Of Travel And Journey |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Of Travel and Journey I have found that most that traveled south And have entered east and west and north Have found somehow the center of their mouth. Senses, stuffed and stored, having filled a fallow brain Compresses it somehow into an applesauce That gushes and spouts like a fountain unrestrained. I too have traveled to touch extremes And have stored and stuffed my shallow brain Only to find the middle of means. And having found this riddles middle mean Gained a balanced gyrate of a sort A comfort port almost like morphine. That removes the riot of epiderm Into the quiet of a proved confirm. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
aha...that's the mushy feeling... applesauce... and I'd ask for a dose of morphine, except I am allergic... so I must contend with the import and impact of your words, but not the anesthesia I seek... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Enjoyed your comments. *L* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Great write Sy. . . this is quite a trip. . . Excellent. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Highlander Member
since 2000-11-06
Posts 50Dundee, Scotland |
Seymour, I enjoyed your rhyme scheme. Well done. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You are a master of deliberations, sy... I enjoyed this one tremdendously, and still have much pondering to do on it. An honest self inventory may be indeed the thing for me right now. Thank you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, Thank you my friend. Highlander, Thank you for the well done. Serenity, Glad you enjoyed, nice comment. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
headed south...finding my center of my mouth?? you've been reading my poetry again LOL  (sorry bad joke)  *smile*I like my applesauce with cinnamon *winkiewinkie* poetic, perfect, perpetual, ponderings Sy-guy you've been eating off that wisdom apple tree again I see ... love this ones moral ... and your rhyme is like apple butter later-digging your gyrate-gator hehe jm |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I thank you for the return of the applesauce with cinnamom. It was very sweet. Winkiewinkie, *L* Sy |
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