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The ultimate union
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The ultimate union |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
The ultimate union I search through my mind’s maze looking for words that can do justice to the feelings here in my heart of hearts. They soar like the birds in migratory flight, dependent, near. Then they are captured and put into some form that begins to make a sort of sense out of the chaos. They become the sum of senses that are allowed to condense themselves into word pictures with feeling. I bring these emotions into the light of my intellect and send you reeling with their impact and you sudden insight into the depth, width, and breadth of the love I have for you. Yet you recover, dear, and respond, though guardedly, with your trove of smiles and coy glances as you draw near and offer your warm, sweet, soft lips to mine in answer to my words. As our lips meld into one, we savor the moment, dine on our emotions, with our spirits held high by the immenseness of our sharing such wonderful feelings with each other. We are happy while giving and caring, each to and for the love of another, for the love of me for you, you for me, and, yes, for the ultimate union … WE! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Interloper, What a great write. Welcome to passions, I hope your stay here is a long and happy one. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Interloper~ WELCOME!!  Every word....beautiful...I liked this VERY much! Will be looking forward to more from you! -SEA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Thank you. You really know how to make a guy feel welcome. Love is. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is quite artfully crafted.. aside from your adept theme development, you've incorporated some great imagery and kept a consistent meter and rhyme scheme... Nice poetic piece, Interloper... Welcome to Passions - It's a great place - You'll love it here... Do check your email for a special greeting..  |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
As our lips meld into one, we savor the moment, dine on our emotions This is very appetizing welcome Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
A great expression of a moment...with good movement, and good flow. Welcome! KThe wind shifts like this: Like a human without illusions... This is how the wind shifts: Like a human, heavy and heavy, Who does not care. W.S |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Nan - Thank you. Coming from you, I am flattered. A Whisper's Caress - You caress my sensibilities. Glad you were able to partake. Severn - Deepest thanks. Love is. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Feel free to interlope anytime. This had a certain movement to it that added to the ending emotion. Welcome to Passions! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Interloper, Welcome to Passions! Your words are going to bring a sparkle, I can tell... welcome, stay awhile, sit back and relax, enjoy the ride! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Serenity - Thanks for the "leave" to "lope." Sunshine - When you are out I can't help but sparkle ... thanx. Love is. |
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