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Enchanting Blue Eyes
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Enchanting Blue Eyes |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Oh my God this is beautiful. You have out done yourself Sir. |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Good morning, Bill. Such a nice presentation and lovely poem. She must be a wonder, for you to express your devotion in this charming poetic and visual display! Rainydays |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Yes, beautiful, Bill! Tis your words that enchant, my friend! Corinne |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Excellent work... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Wow, Bill! Absolutely beautiful!! I love it!! sp  Do not go where the path may lead, but instead, go where there is no path and leave a trail. - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
this was gorgeous Bill..and i loved the beautiful graphic too..thank you for writing for all of us blue eyes ladies ha.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"You are the most sensuous woman I have ever known." Bill I take it you like blue eyes...wonderful presentation...had to put on my glasses for the small print. James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inot2B - I treasure your most gracious compliments. Thank you inot2B Rainydays - A wonder indeed perhaps, but I enjoyed writing it. I thank you for your kind complements. Corinne - thanks for the kind complements. Yes, it is the words that enchant, and I thank you for your words. nakdthoughts - thank you for the kind words. snowpants - you are very kind with your words about this writing. Thank you snowpants. Victoria - thank you so much, it was gorgeous blues eyes that I could see as I wrote it. And you are very welcome, blue eyes! jmlee12345 - I do have a preference, and thanks for your comments. It was made smaller to fit, but now it can't be read. So, I think that I will post it without the graphic. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
No, no Bill don't take away the graphics...I enjoyed the poem in its entirity with the picture...thats why I came back again...if you take away the picture everyone will be wondering what the picture looked like and they'll think how come that James had to go and open his big mouth...so please...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
James - no problem, I posted one without the grahic that's readable, and I'll leave the graphic up also. That way, the graphic is up for anyone that wants to see it. Bill |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh my Bill ... absolutely beautiful! Sigh, just heavenly pictures you've painted in this verse, and presented in such a wonderful arrangement ... excellent! Best wishes, /Kit |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Bill You have certainly captured the beauty of this angel and her blue eyes. Beautiful writing! didi |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
It's O.K., Bill... Don't you be concerned... "Beautiful Brown Eyes"... "Enchanting Blue Eyes"... next is probably green... ... Of course, I really love your work - It's wonderful.. even if you don't write about "hazelish"... NO PROBLEM!!...  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Kit McCallum - thank you so much Kit, comments such as yours make the effort all worth while. Thanks again. ddgoose - thanks for the kindness of your comments. Nan - well, I'll have you know that I heard a little rumor that there is one in the works about hazel eyes. You are too kind with your words, but of course don't stop. hehehe. |
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