»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #10
»
Peach
| Open Poetry #10 |
|
Peach |
|
|
Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
I notice a blush of pink on soft flesh Cupping you tenderly I bring you to me Lips locking on delicate skin A slight pressure causes sweet nectar to flow Trickling down the corners of my mouth To drip from my chin And deep within the honey flesh I find the core of desires Within is the pit, the heart of the fruit A treasure within a treasure Lips and tongue tenderly pry at it Teeth nibbling carefully tease its bordering flesh With each taste thick sweet syrup flows Slowly, patiently, playfully, I set you free And then I will plant you within a warm bed Blanket you with care, And tend you as you grow strength again Ready to blossom and fruit Once ripened I will devour you again [This message has been edited by Ron K. Fox (edited 11-05-2000).] |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Ronald Kenneth Fox - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Hi Ron, This is soo sensual yet tender. Wonderful write. Peach just happens to be my favorite fruit. Enjoyed. Love, Marcy |
||
|
Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Yes. That is my favorite fruit also, and you have described enjoyment of it in a great way. I once attempted to do the same thing. Yours is much better than mine, let me assure you.  |
||
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
a succulent poem indeed ron..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
||
|
Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Ron, you've done this very well. Cleverly suggestive, remarkably innocent. Delectable reading. Rainydays |
||
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RonFox~ You made my craving for peaches even stronger. What a delicious render. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
