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A Whispering From Within
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A Whispering From Within |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
A Whispering From Within In an obscure image she hovers aloft his bed casting herself in his dreams Adorned in translucent overlays of white if he were to awaken he would surely see an angel Covetous of being the dream itself she drifts into him as he sleeps making herself known to his spirit And with the dawning of morning’s light her chant of love is heard in a whisper from within . 11-4-00 |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful! Lovely! Denise |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Denise, I am thrilled you found this to be so lovely. Thank you. Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written.... enjoyed your poem... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
beatiful and serene! enjoyed much. welcome to Passions & i look forward to reading more from you. take care. amy  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
can I just say that I really loved this? just perfect. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Poetboy96 Junior Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 12 |
There is a lot of love in this place. I am glad many can express it, this is a perfect example. Beautiful piece. John www.johnspoetry.com |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
I really want to thank everyone for being so thoughtful in theirs replies to this post. Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
this is exactly the kind of poetry I enjoy, and I wish I had been the one to write it, but since you did, I will just have to place this in my library... well done...I will enjoy this for a long time... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WhispersCaress~ This is a beautiful write. 'Covetous of being the dream itself she drifts into him as he sleeps making herself known to his spirit' Oh, my ... how real it is. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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