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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2000-11-04 11:27 PM


A Whispering From Within

In an obscure image
she hovers aloft his bed
casting herself in his dreams

Adorned in translucent overlays of white
if he were to awaken
        he would surely see an angel

Covetous of being the dream itself
she drifts into him as he sleeps
making herself known to his spirit

And with the dawning of morning’s light
her chant of love is heard
in a whisper from within .

11-4-00


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Denise
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1 posted 2000-11-04 11:33 PM


Very beautiful! Lovely!

Denise

A Whisper's Caress
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2 posted 2000-11-04 11:46 PM


Denise,
I am thrilled you found this to be
so lovely. Thank you.


Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul.

Mike
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3 posted 2000-11-05 11:16 AM


Nicely written....  enjoyed your poem...
Aimster
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4 posted 2000-11-05 11:59 AM


beatiful and serene! enjoyed much.
welcome to Passions & i look forward
to reading more from you. take care.

amy  

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5 posted 2000-11-05 01:50 PM


can I just say that I really loved this?

just perfect. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
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Poetboy96
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6 posted 2000-11-05 01:56 PM


There is a lot of love in this place.  I am glad many can express it, this is a perfect example.  Beautiful piece.
John www.johnspoetry.com

A Whisper's Caress
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7 posted 2000-11-05 04:54 PM


I really want to thank everyone
for being so thoughtful in theirs replies
to this post.


Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
8 posted 2000-11-05 04:56 PM


this is exactly the kind of poetry I enjoy, and I wish I had been the one to write it, but since you did, I will just have to place this in my library...

well done...I will enjoy this for a long time...


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



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9 posted 2000-11-05 05:22 PM


WhispersCaress~

This is a beautiful write.

'Covetous of being the dream itself
she drifts into him as he sleeps
making herself known to his spirit'


Oh, my ... how real it is.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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