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If I coud . . . I would |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
If I could harness the moon’s glow, I’d put it in your eyes. If I could capture the sunlight, I’d put it in your hair. If I could reach the stars, I’d make a bracelet for your wrist. If I could gather all the love in existence, I’d put it in your heart. If I could . . . I would. Love is. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Somehow I think you just have...this is beautiful~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful thoughts Interloper ... and expressed in such a lovely way, nicely done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice..James |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
LOPER, you know this verse is real sweet the 'if's of life just come alive when put to expression on screen A delightful read Coco |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Interloper- this is wonderful. such beautiful and loving thoughts you've expressed here. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Just the desire to do these lovely things is poetry in itself. A very sweet composition, thank you ~ Rainydays |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is so delicate and sincere so much expressed and painted with a few perfectly chosen lines... in the case of this gem... less is much more simply beautiful. welcome to passions...so nice to meet you take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Beautifully said in so few words. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
wonderful poem Rich |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Interloper~ If you could see my eyes, I'd show you the moonglow within them...... If you could see my hair,I'd show you the sunlight flowing through it....... If you could reach the stars, I'd ask you to keep them free....... If you could just feel my heart, you would know all the love in existance........ I'd love it, if you could. I loved this poem!! -SEA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I am almost speachless. Tears tug at my eyes. I feel almost inadequate compared to the verse you share with us. Butterflies don't cry - Consider it a gift from me. Kit - thank you. James, thanx Coco-Baci, yore 1derful. Vickie - Thank you Rainydays - Desire is the foundation of poetry. Janet Marie - I am still recovering from reading your ode to DeVante. You are incredible. Ron - Maybe those economics classes in college worked. D'ya think? Spiked - Thank you SEA - Sweet, wonderful SEA. We will let the stars shine where they are. And I CAN feel your heart... honest I can. Love is. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Words from your heart...inspired mine...... -SEA |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Now here is an example of love..Why is it that only poets think like this? Beautiful poem. Sandra |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Now here is an example of love..Why is it that only poets think like this? Beautiful poem. Sandra |
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