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kitkat
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since 2000-01-11
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Nova Scotia

0 posted 2000-11-04 06:23 PM



Wispy slow movement
Embrace heavenly bodies
Dancing in moonlight

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat you better
You're gonna find, yes you will
That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King



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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2000-11-04 06:39 PM


How enchanting!...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
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2 posted 2000-11-04 06:44 PM


KitKat~
A most delightful little haiku....well done  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
3 posted 2000-11-04 06:49 PM


Nicely done, I like it

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

Victoria
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4 posted 2000-11-04 06:52 PM


a beautiful haiku it is..

                     ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

5 posted 2000-11-04 06:56 PM


few words to portray a beautiful momentt of embrace.lovely indeed. Ron

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox


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