Open Poetry #10 |
Dance (Haiku) |
kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Wispy slow movement Embrace heavenly bodies Dancing in moonlight -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How enchanting!... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
KitKat~ A most delightful little haiku....well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Nicely done, I like it "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
a beautiful haiku it is.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
few words to portray a beautiful momentt of embrace.lovely indeed. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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