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Sporting A Higher Octane
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Sporting A Higher Octane ~*Marge Tindal*~ You took my heart for a joy ride. Pushed the pedal to the floor. Revving it up with pride, you ran it 'round once more. Once around the block was enough I do suppose. Just a thrill ride for you. That's how this jalopy heart goes ! You took my heart for a ride then brought it back with an empty tank. I just hate to admit it but your driving really stank ! I towed to the nearest pump and had it filled again. That good-looking guy at the gas station sure sports a higher octane ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Ya made me grin again, mom...thanks so much!!! Hugs you!!! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
VRRRRRRRRRRRRRRROOOOOOOOOOM!!!! I think a test drive may be in order...hehehehehe  LOL...love the way you think Marge!!!! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
way to go Marge haa..higher octane..i like that..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ You took my heart for a ride then brought it back with an empty tank. I just hate to admit it but your driving really stank ! LOL. This was too cool my friend!! You have made me laugh until it hurt, but it was well worth it!!LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Marge~ I never have words enough to say what a joy your poetry is to read. Never boring, and I knew from the title it was another "sporty one". Loved it! Deb |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- lol...lovin' this. what a gas...lol...sorry, couldn't help myself. i just love when you're feelin' feisty, my friend. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Whoa, baby ! He really had something under the hood ! ButterfliesDC~ Girlfriend ... this fellow could make my engine roar anytime ! Not sure I was thinking ... more like lusting with my brain and other relevant parts ! Victoria~ Oh, honey ... he had a tiger in his tank ! LoneWolf~ I can GUARANTEE if you'd seen him you'd be grinning big time ! BloomingRose~ Okay ... sporty fits it just right ! Vicky~ Feisty ? Oh, honey ... I didn't even CARE how much the gas cost ! *You gals are soooooo much fun ! I wish we could have a slumber party ! Wouldn't that be a blast ? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- LOL..ok..so perhaps 'feisty' isn't the right word here...lol. so...just where is this gas station??? maybe i need to take a cross-country drive. btw...slumber party sounds good to me...i'm there!! hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Maybe more like frisky ? ! ! LOL !  Love n' hugs. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
LOL Marge, so cute!! know what you mean about the guy at the station, always ben a sucker for a guy in a uniform good one & laughed out loud. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I just have to say to that guy at the station "WATCH OUT she's looking for a new heart... you might be in for more WOMAN than you can HANDLE!! I know cause I read here all the time and I just know!! yessiree! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Compassion~ Thank you for the reply. Welcome to Passions. ETHome~ LOL !  Now don't go giving away ALL my secrets ! *winking* at ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
.....LOL Very impressive Marge girl Thanks for the giggle tonight Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, very impressive, a super octane write. be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge, this really brought a smile to me today. Ah! there it is, thank you for the lift. Great poem, love this one. Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
There's no end to creativity in the passionate mind of yours Thouroughly enjoyable read as I was laughing Liz |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
Marge, a very funny and enjoyable read. Thanks Jon |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Glad to get you giggling ! Kethry~ Thanks, gal ! Marsha~ Pleased to put a smile in your tank ! Elizabeth~ Sort of falls into that HARD-HAT ZONE huh ? LOL ! JonMc~ Glad you enjoyed it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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