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Beki
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since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

0 posted 2000-11-04 04:13 PM

Squirrels scatter
rustle gold and crimson leaves
autumn wind whispers.

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-11-04 04:15 PM

~Mm,...enjoyed this, you've captured it beautifully. Take care now. *Peace.

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

2 posted 2000-11-04 04:52 PM

Good one.

I had a FALL day.
I fell face down on the ground.
Nose bleed and leaves.

Melton

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

3 posted 2000-11-04 05:11 PM

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2000-11-04 05:47 PM

Beki, charming read!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

5 posted 2000-11-04 06:46 PM

Nicely done

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

6 posted 2000-11-04 06:51 PM

lovely read Beki...well done

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

7 posted 2000-11-05 01:49 AM

Nice! "autumn wind whispers" I do love that line, well done!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

8 posted 2000-11-05 05:11 AM

Thanks to all for reading, I appreciate your comments

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

9 posted 2000-11-05 03:39 PM

shamelessly pushing myself up for more comment....

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

10 posted 2000-11-05 03:42 PM

very nice beki..i love squirrels in the autumn especially..Enjoyed..

~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

11 posted 2000-11-16 06:46 PM

your haiku are very visual...such great images they conjured in my mind...thank you

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