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Winter Haiku 01 |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Through leafless branches morning breaks rose petal pink - I drink black coffee. |
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Allstaria22 Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 83MN USA |
I usually am not a fan of Haiku, but I liked this one, the second line was so visual. good job Dana Isaiah 1:18 "Everybody loves a rose, will you be thankful for the thorns?" -All Together Seperate |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
ALways glad to hook someone who doesn't usually like the form! Thanks for reading  |
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Masked Intruder
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since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Two of my favorite contrasting colors! Rose petal pink and black coffee black. Which color do you like to wear? |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Beki~ This is so cute, I love it...well penned hon Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Thanks Masked..to answer your question...pink? Not if I can help it..and black? Quite often though I favor forest green and denim blue Tracie, thanks a bunch |
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Masked Intruder
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since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
I'll have to agree with you on the pink. I like to look at it, but it's really hard to bring myself to wear it. *grins* Black used to be my favorite color to wear, but then I moved to a place where it was a very depressing idea to wear black because the sun might cook you like a loaf of bread if you wore it. So now I'm all about blue jeans and white tshirts. And, yes yes yes, blue and green go great together! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Through leafless branches morning breaks rose petal pink - I drink black coffee. In empty spaces Within the arms that cradle, Trees whisper of loss. a haiku moment...enjoyed yours ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
I enjoyed your moment very much as well..."trees whisper loss" what a great image! "Whispers" finds its way into so many of my poems, I like how you used it in yours. Thanks for reading and sharing |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
here I go again, bumpin for more comment forgive me please |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
a serene moment you have captured....i enjoyed |
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