»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #10
»
Haul Off And Love Me
| Open Poetry #10 |
|
Haul Off And Love Me |
|
Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
|
Haul Off And Love Me ~*Marge Tindal*~ Honey, if I've a preference and I most certainly do I'd want you to haul off and love me the way you used to do Raptured rhapsody in your eyes Catching me in sweet surprise Whispers breathing ecstasy Reaching every crevice of me Touch me tenderly with your sighs Softly covered in rays of you Breathless dawns a new sunrise As one thought takes possession ~ of two ~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
"Haul off and love me" "as one thought takes possession of two"... Just love it Marge! |
||
|
lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Ooo Baby, shud dup and kiss me. LOL I'll collect the kiss from RJ, she's real handy that way. Lucky for you... huh dale< !signature--> Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. ~Marge Tindal~ [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 11-04-2000).] |
||
|
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marge - what can I say, but another excellent poem from you. They are always writings that I for one, throughly enjoy. Bill |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bonnie~ Glad to catch you in a thought ! Lucky~ *smiling* ... Gotta LOVE those kisses ! Bill~ Thank you for the sweet reply. I enjoy writing them for you to enjoy reading. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Spontaneous...just do it. Love it. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Marge--If I were he I would...cause who could refuse such Raptured rhapsody? Love ya, sis! |
||
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ooh I do so love the romantic side of Margie-girl and this is one of my new favs... so perfect... wonderful melodic cadence ... excellent poetry my dear... later-love-it-when-you-sigh-gator jm |
||
|
vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- now, who could possibly say no to this.  beautiful, my friend...and very romantic. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
||
|
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge, this is absolutely a prize, I really love this. I love it when you do romance Marge, you do it oh sooooooo well. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
||
|
Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
You know if we all could get together this evening, there would be a bonfire like no other! I mean, the women of Passions are expressing themselves!! Marge, I have dishes to do! Who cares? I'd rather write of love and passion and read the ones like this that inspire me to do just that!< !signature--> "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 11-04-2000).] |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RonFox~ Ahhhh ! Yes ! Spontaneity - the spice of life ! Martie~ I was test-marketing a little of that Blushing Significance ! Great name for a new fragrance !  JanetMarie~ I've got *sighs* all over the place. An old theme with new strategy ! Vicky~ Tee-Hee ! He didn't ! Oops ... Marsha~ Of all the states that I've been in I like ROMANCE the most. Kathleen~ Honey ... get those self-destructing dishes ! We gotta lotta romance to write ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, I'll haul off and love ya! I'll smack you in the mouth! I'll beat your lips with these of mine And then I'm heading south!!  I'm giving you the old one-two And maybe three and four! I'll knock you out and you won't want To get up off the floor!!! |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ Listen to you, Lover Lips All that fire and passion If you wanna haul off and love me put little gentleness in your fashion ! One thing I should tell you before you get too turned on Ya' gotta be a little more gentle if you want to sing my song ! So bring it on big boy ! I'm waiting for you now Just don't go bringing any of those Uganda Cows ! *wink* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
There must be something in the air lately, so many love poems! This is great, Marge. I just wrote one similar to this last night that I am getting ready to post. Denise |
||
|
Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hey, Marge, I will be gentle I'll thrill you with my touch. So please don't think I'm mental I just want you very much! I'll touch your skin with fingertips And then with my moustache Then kiss your back with my wet lips If you don't think I'm brash. You never need to worry how Your pleasure is my gain And I won't bring Uganda cows... That's udderly insane!! |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Romance is alive and well. In Passions Hall it surely dwells. Excuse me while I continue to let Balladeer know what's on the menu. Balladeer~ Now you're talking, Lover Boy ! You've got my number and name - Bring those wet lips on and drive me udderly insane ! I'll curl your little moustache and bring new light to your eyes. And all the while - you will smile gently through your sighs. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Oh, Marge, you sure do know the way To bring smiles to my eyes I'm heading up the road and you can Try me on for sighs!!!!! |
||
|
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Love this title, Marge. And the poem is great. Thats what would happen if I had my choice, too. Sandra |
||
|
Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So it is love you are after now This is one ride I know I can do You may see my "horse" but never a cow So prepare my friend as this cowboy loves you With a lasso of silk and a saddle of leather Spurs of spontaneity and a "range" of styles As "we"create the climate of our own weather I will rest not until you have had a trillion smiles [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 11-05-2000).] |
||
|
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
sweet yuh sweet a treat and neat mite cant be beat |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ I feel you getting closer burning up the miles ... The door's unlocked ... But, please knock For I'm wearing nothing but a smile ! CatalinaMoon~ Glad to draw you in ... Thanks for liking the choices. MarkB~ Cowboy of a trillion smiles That silken rope is just my style ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
