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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Winkiewinkie She oscillates by osculate With flowers of her postulate. She vibrates on a fragile skin My oldish heart that beats within. She soothes and billows my ID to fire With words that quote in retrofire. She holds a mirror to my face What else to do but self embrace. She plays my ego wise and sweet And knows the mirror is a treat. So winkiewinkie slinkieslinkie Twirls me on her little pinky. But I love the dizzy whirl-i-gig It's something that I really dig. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh...I love this!...winkie winkie |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, I think we all know who this might be for....lucky gal! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Winkie, winkie...J Marie Sy wrote this for you, I see You have tickled Seymour's muse Struck a match and lit his fuse Winkie winkie...J Marie Won't you do the same for me?  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ This is so adorable ! She will be so tickled ! I can just see your boyish delight written all over this piece. *JanetMarie~ *Hugs* for the *hugs* you give our Sy-guy ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
This one made me stop in my tracks, and re-read it! Ho ho - what a puzzle! Very cleverly worded. The title drew me in, and I was well rewarded! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sy this is fantastic! You took an innocent phrase and created a wonderful poem!  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Great job Sy! I love this one. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
For sweet Sy ... He saturates my need for rhyme poetic wisdom kissed with cadence time Lessons of life captured in rhythmic scheme Visions of prophets in resplendent dreams Mystic and Cryptic ... this poetic paradox Exotic and Erotic ... rare as an equinox Pendulums keep time to his rhyme and verse secret tapestries unravel his venial curse Inscriptions that enchant and mesmerize rites of passage written in lavish lullabies Celestial prisms of his genius will define engraved in poetic stone ... destiny's design Tho my words will never do him justice this gift from the heart ... that poetry entrusts us. ********** Sy...if only you could have seen the smile on my face when I saw this ... Thank you for making this blue butterfly soar... your the wind beneath my wings tonight. thank you for all that your poetry and presence in Passions has come be. You are a gift to us all here. thank you for sharing that gift with me... *winkiewinkie* *kisskiss* love ya Sy-guy JM ================ by the way... ya rang my bell and chinged my chime thank you for the winkie rhyme later-put-the-C-in-cool-gator |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Winkiewinkie. *L* Karilea, And winkiewinkie to you too. *L* Balladeer, I'm sure she will. Marge, And hugs to you too. *L* Rosemary, Thank you so much for the lovely comment. Poet deVine, She is so lovable it was easy. Thank you Sven, you are a good friend. JM, So glad you smiled and laughed at this It should have ended with a kiss. So winkiewinkie kissiekissie my little donee. Love Sy |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Sy, this made me smile when I saw the title..isn't she the cutest thing with her pet talk? This poem is terrific!  marcy |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Yeah, she is pretty cute with her little catch phrase isn't she? Excellent little verse for our queen of winkie winkies. Loved it there Sy my man. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
*smiles..very sweet ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
A beautiful tribute to our favorite *winkiewinkie-gator-girlie* Loved it Sy just like I love my SS!! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh those little endearing names make the world go around...you certainly set it down in wonderful style ...Seymour.....Write on up!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Alle'cram, Thank you so much Marcy. Mark, Big thanks my man Mark. Nakdthoughts, Thanks for the smiles. Butterfly, Winkiewinkie butterfly. Ethome, Thank you for the wonderful comp. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sybaby... I was so excited when i replied to this lastnight that I forgot to check the box to place it in my library file ... so I am back ... I must have this in my collection to treasure tho its already in my heart. thank you again for such a wonderful gift and thank you all who said such sweet and kind things on this thread. the friendships found here cross all barriers, time zones and close in the distances. My sweet DeVante'used to say... "there is no distance between us ... we are seperated only by the miles... and by our poetry we travel the roads to each others hearts." this special place and the people in it... proves that point. love ya all in poetry land love ya sweet-Sy jm |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
sorry for the double post...computer glitch *winkiewinkie* < !signature--> There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 11-04-2000).] |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
fabulous poem - I'd say it even if it weren't for JM ~G~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This describes her so perfectly, her exuberance, her charm, and her ability to light your poetic fire as only she can. What would we do without Janet Marie? And what would we do without you I loved,loved loved this poem! Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, We ring each others chimes In a strong rapport We have as they say esprit de corp. Beyond that what could be more? *L* Sy Wilfred, Thank you for the fabulous my friend. Elizabeth, And I absolutely loved your answer. Love Sy |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sy, Ditto to Elizabeth. What WOULD we do without you both. Loved the flow and style of this tribute. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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