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Turning Up The Flames Of Love's Passion
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Turning Up The Flames Of Love's Passion |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Turning Up The Flames Of Love's Passion Sleepily, dreamily I stir gently in my sleep And I feel you stiring against my heated thigh Which wakens me to desires flares, heat flows My breath is caught, stopped, I breathe a sigh Ah! We celebrate the rising of the misty dawn Stary eyed, gasping with passion, just satisfied I gaze in awed wonder that there is such bliss Your eyes, caressing, grazing my flushed skin With butterfly delicacy, you gently place a kiss My heart, yours from the very begining, flips Without a pause we cruise on back into the heat The flames forever burning, begin to build again Sending fire to bathe us both in passions desire This love, it feeds us, while giving, we will gain Fire on heat, burning love sends us flying higher Love and passion are bound, both held together Your lips as soft as silk, press hard as steel Caressing me inflames my constant burning pulse Tell me, Oh please show me this is so very real Sear your name, burn it deep into my lovers soul Marsha (SEA another one that's not mushy) Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
many will come, many will read, and many will say...well done! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Whew...I need a fan. a/c would be better...In the heat of the night...or a night of heat...either way...very good..you have my attention Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
marsha my my my i think my computer got on fire...LOL  this is excellent!sounds like you got some pent up tension girlie that needs immediate release hehe very passionate!!  take care, amy  |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Wow, another scorcher!!! Very well written; it definitely held my attention Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, thanks love, I did say I needed the temperature to vary, so does this vary enough Glad you liked it, now I wonder if my man does, I'll have to see his reaction.  Ron, what you're hot, surely not, I thought the flames were a little low! I'm pleased that this held your attention.  Amy, quick call the fire brigade, so you like this? Good, I'm very pleased. Pepper, Mmmmm sizzle, a little does it? That was the very idea. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
your right its not mushy.... its dreamy and steamy and marvelous ... suberb sensuality Marsha ... the passions oozes from every word. Im sure it will make MUSH out of him tho LOL and Im sure he will be quite happy to be your mush-man wonderful writing take care jm |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
JM, dreamy and very steamy is what I was after. Thank you, now all I need is to introduce a few more fireworks and I have myself a great bonfire night. Now does anyone know where I can get some special rockets. No it's okay I think my special someone has enough fireworks for us both.Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Marsha, Marsha, Marsha!! We must be of like mind this evening. WOW, this is quite something. You are a brave lass to express yourself! Now, go get him! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kathleen, thank you muchly. I don't think bravery enters into the equation, I simply have to write exactly what I'm feeling. It's like telling the sea not to rush to the shore, or the wind not to blow. They can't do what's it's their nature to do, and I simply cannot either. I'm glad you're in the same mind as I am, wonderful isn't it. Enjoy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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