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She'll call Today
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She'll call Today |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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She'll call today I told her she'd be OK She said, that's what they all say. I told her, I'd be back She said forget it jack. I told her I loved her still She said now isn't that a thrill. I told her what I said was true. She said now isn't that a coup. I said goodbye she did not cry Nor did a tear appear her eye. I turned away and heard a scream And that's when I awoke the dream. My hand shot out the telephone I told her that I was alone She said I'll be right over dear Today it's only been a year. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I'd have come running..........  -SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
 ...so sad Sy-guy ...maybe she lost the number maybe she lost her way maybe she lost the address went to the wrong house to play ... I'll make your phone ding-a-ling Ill make your bells and chimes ring then I'll buzz your line bring over a bottle of wine her loss is my gain maybe someday she will explain. *winkiewinkie* later-she-dont-know-what-shes-missing-gator  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
may I simply ditto JM...who said it best as a response?< !signature--> Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-01-2000).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Man I hate it when that happens! Very good poem for delivering the truth about her petulant message. The point comes across very well and I like how it ends. If she calls you could say you were busy and that you'd just won a million dollars and had quite a busy schedule for at least the next forty years. I don't know????.......take care......ethome |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymore, this is such a good write, love this the way it ran. Soooooo good excellant write, and I always deliver on my promises Now what was that number again?Take care Marsha (Sorry think a devil must have jumped me yesterday  )Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Even though, after reading this thread and finding that JanetMarie prefers another over me, I still like the poem... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Excellent write, and sad to still think so much of her after a year. Thats all I can look forward to, I guess.  Take care. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, And I'd be waiting. *L* JM, You make my phone ring now. And your intoxicating enough without the wine. Winkiewinkie. Sy Kerilea, *L* ya. Sy Ethome, Great idea, thanks. Marsha' Your the one. *L* Ballader, You are the soul of grace. Catalinamon, Thanks for the exellence. *L* |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
I suggest an answering machine--- great poem! Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Great one from you Sy. . .it's all there. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Hmmmmm this little gal gets around...steals 'deer's rhyme and steals your heart and ringer...Miss Heartbreak needs to be taught a lesson in manners Great writing Sy...always a pleasure! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I'd say she forgot how to push those buttons, forgot your number, or she said she'd call in November, she just didn't say which November...James |
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