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Open Poetry #10

Pondering The Obvious

Dr.Moose1
Member Elite

since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2000-11-04 11:20 PM

Immersed with-in this element
with no advance fore-glimming
of words which may be relevant
up-stream I keep on swimming

The current weighs quite heavily
upon my awkward form
Yet constantly un-tiring
I press 'till current warms
and there positioned in the flow
of other's heart-felt thoughts
once more I return to the sea
with more than what I brought

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-11-04 11:24 PM

Once again, an excellent expression that I wish I had thought to write! I agree, this place does enrich us, doesn't it?

Denise

jonmcm
Member

since 2000-10-11

Posts 222
England

2 posted 2000-11-05 05:47 AM

I enjoyed this poem very much!

'once more I return to the sea
with more than what I brought'

Cheers
Jon

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2000-11-05 07:15 AM

I love your writing
This is superb
Liz

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