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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2000-11-03 05:17 PM




a song resides here
inside mine heart wherein love
listens intently

hear thee closely so
your heart will sing then with me
bells peal merrily

ring bell, merrily
tingle and ding cheerily
my love song to thee


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



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Saxoness
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1 posted 2000-11-03 05:29 PM


Excellent! Haikus have always been one of my favorites.  I love it when a person can say so much with so little. Good job

"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

Kethry
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2 posted 2000-11-03 05:53 PM


Karilea,
excellent write, it's amazing how much can be in seventeen short syllables.
Be well
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

Dark Angel
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3 posted 2000-11-03 07:17 PM


Hallo Sunshine  

3 wonderful haiku's blending nicely into one another, forming this beautiful Haiku Song  

loved it
excellent!

Maree

"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this won't be enough"
"Maree Russo"

Sven
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4 posted 2000-11-03 09:06 PM


Just wonderful Sunshine. . .

I can hear it now. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Ron K. Fox
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5 posted 2000-11-03 09:11 PM


short and lovely. I hear the chime.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox


tracie66
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6 posted 2000-11-03 10:05 PM


Sweet sunshine
What a lovely haiku you have sung tonight...just adorable  
Love Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Sunshine
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7 posted 2000-11-06 02:35 PM


Thank you all...this sings sweetly to me, too!...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



Mark Bohannan
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8 posted 2000-11-06 04:47 PM


So do you sing to cowboys solo style?  

Lovely song of Haikus my friend.  Just as lovely as your poems always.


Sunshine
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9 posted 2000-11-07 09:22 AM


No Mark, the only person who hears me sing is my dog...LOL...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



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