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A Haiku Song
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A Haiku Song |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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a song resides here inside mine heart wherein love listens intently hear thee closely so your heart will sing then with me bells peal merrily ring bell, merrily tingle and ding cheerily my love song to thee Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Excellent! Haikus have always been one of my favorites. I love it when a person can say so much with so little. Good job "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Karilea, excellent write, it's amazing how much can be in seventeen short syllables. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hallo Sunshine  3 wonderful haiku's blending nicely into one another, forming this beautiful Haiku Song loved it excellent! Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Just wonderful Sunshine. . . I can hear it now. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
short and lovely. I hear the chime. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sweet sunshine What a lovely haiku you have sung tonight...just adorable Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you all...this sings sweetly to me, too!... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So do you sing to cowboys solo style?  Lovely song of Haikus my friend. Just as lovely as your poems always. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
No Mark, the only person who hears me sing is my dog...LOL... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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