Open Poetry #10 |
Lil Rant By Me |
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
I will not change how I write Not mushy or gushy deep fried or light Not pushy or shushy brilliant or bright I will not change how I pen Not silly or frilly or lover of Zen Not chilly hillbilly or just to offend Of suicide, to get a bride or a groom To openly confide I cannot abide my doom To kaleidoscope the soap of rope is my life To speak the Pope is a dope as is his wife I will not write cute to be a brute or serene I won’t bear fruit in birthday suit obscene I can never thank the entire world for upsetting me I will never change nor thank you for letting me! [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 11-03-2000).] |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Rant on, McWalt! This is a sure thing. Rainy |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Wayout, Boy am I glad to hear you say that, I don't think there's a one of us who would have you change a thing, 'cept maybe your socks once in a while ( if we're down wind ). Doc |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
ipsy dipsy thank you 2 |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hey Walt this is more like a medium size rant...James |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Don't you dare change a thing, I'll be watching you, walt. Well done. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Don't you dare change this style cause it's very unique and I love your inside, rhyme schemes...brilliant piece! Nathan |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
OK>>>>Hands UP>>>STEP AWAY FROM THE CHOCOLATE Yuh this is you Walt and we like ya just the way you are YUH! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
rant rant rant cant? cant? cant? yuh yuh can |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Walt, don't you dare change I've just got use to your way out way. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
like your style... it made me smile.. Charisma |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Walt, may God always grant your right to rant!!! |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Yuh! I agree wholeheartedly! (You know, your unique style is a treat to read. Yuh!) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o im not changin |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Yep - I'd know you anywhere... It's rantoutwalt... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
can i o can i get a witness yuh |
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