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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2000-11-03 12:18 PM


I will not change how I write
Not mushy or gushy deep fried or light
Not pushy or shushy brilliant or bright
I will not change how I pen
Not silly or frilly or lover of Zen
Not chilly hillbilly or just to offend
Of suicide, to get a bride or a groom
To openly confide I cannot abide my doom
To kaleidoscope the soap of rope is my life
To speak the Pope is a dope as is his wife
I will not write cute to be a brute or serene
I won’t bear fruit in birthday suit obscene
I can never thank the entire world for upsetting me
I will never change nor thank you for letting me!



[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 11-03-2000).]

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Rainydays
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1 posted 2000-11-03 12:22 PM


Rant on, McWalt! This is a sure thing.

Rainy

Dr.Moose1
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2 posted 2000-11-03 12:23 PM


Wayout,
Boy am I glad to hear you say that, I don't think there's a one of us who would have you change a thing, 'cept maybe your socks once in a while ( if we're down wind ).
Doc

wayoutwalt
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3 posted 2000-11-03 01:46 PM


ipsy dipsy thank you 2  
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2000-11-03 02:19 PM


Hey Walt this is more like a medium size rant...James
serenity blaze
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5 posted 2000-11-03 02:30 PM


Don't you dare change a thing, I'll be watching you, walt.  Well done.
Nate Dogg
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Georgia, Fulton
6 posted 2000-11-03 03:28 PM


Don't you dare change this style cause it's very unique and I love your inside, rhyme schemes...brilliant piece!

Nathan

Butterflies_dont_cry
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7 posted 2000-11-03 04:00 PM


OK>>>>Hands UP>>>STEP AWAY FROM THE
CHOCOLATE    Yuh this is you Walt and we
like ya just the way you are YUH!

wayoutwalt
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8 posted 2000-11-03 06:08 PM


rant rant rant
cant? cant? cant?
yuh yuh can

inot2B
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9 posted 2000-11-03 07:54 PM


Walt, don't you dare change
I've just got use to
your way out way.

Charisma
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10 posted 2000-11-03 07:58 PM


like your style...
it made me smile..

Charisma

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11 posted 2000-11-03 07:59 PM


Walt, may  God always grant your right to rant!!!
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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12 posted 2000-11-03 08:01 PM


Yuh!  I agree wholeheartedly!

(You know, your unique style is a treat to read.  Yuh!)


wayoutwalt
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13 posted 2000-11-03 08:47 PM


o im not changin  
Nan
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14 posted 2000-11-04 09:44 AM


Yep - I'd know you anywhere... It's rantoutwalt...
wayoutwalt
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15 posted 2000-11-05 12:25 PM


can i o can i get a witness yuh
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