Open Poetry #10 |
Winter Creeping Nigh |
Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
~ ~ ~ < !signature-->~ ~ ~ The scruffy ancient cat shifts upon the sill watching darkness crawl in the field beyond the farmhouse windows lined with steam behind the curtain lace against an invisible sky. Piquant spicy scents curl steaming and hearty from the wood-stove’s back-burnered dutch oven as she lights the oil lamp sitting on the red tablecloth; the flickering crackling fireplace sings while sparks fly. Her lost child’s absence is a silent presence; sweetness once embodied; never possible to deny. And as she works to fill her loved ones' needs, no one hears her sorrowed inner sigh. Moving quietly around the table, she places bowls and spoons beside all but one gingham covered chair, as across the peaceful meadows tiptoes mist with chilled bitter winter creeping nigh. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G. [This message has been edited by Rosemary J. Gwaltney (edited 11-02-2000).] |
||
© Copyright 2000 Rosemary J. Gwaltney - All Rights Reserved | |||
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Rosemary~ Your memories are as real as if I was right there to share them with a hug of affection. Know that I do. Love you ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
||
Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
This is very sad...missing child. An emotional read. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
||
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Rosemary--You paint such a vivid and tender picture of loss in this poem...Hugs always! |
||
Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
like you gripped my heart- and squeezed - yet still gave me current love and beauty to sooth the pain a trifle |
||
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful word pictures filled with wistful reflecting emotions...great work!!....ethome |
||
brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Rosemary, a beautifuly written poem, perfectly capturing the abscence of a loved one.. a very emotive and excellent read. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
||
Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
wonderfully written and expressed... excellent poetry. |
||
jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Touched my heart my friend. Well done. jwesley |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |