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Cupid shot an arrow
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Cupid shot an arrow |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Cupid shot and arrow But my heart he did not find Cupid shot an arrow Right in my Behind this tales a story Of a love that has gone wrong You’ve heard it told in poems before And in a million different songs I thought we had a true love I thought our feelings didn’t lack But a fellow winked and off she went And she still ain’t been back Cupid shot an arrow But my heart he didn’t find Cupid shot an arrow Right in my Behind your bedroom curtain I saw a silhouette Of you and some other man In a lovers sweet duet. My jaw dropped to my ankles Just couldn’t take no more So I went trampling round to the front To find a line six deep at your door Cupid shot an arrow But my heart he did not find Cupid shot an arrow Right in my Behind every great man stands a women And if I do find one by chance I hope she is a seamstress To patch up all my pants. < !signature--> Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox [This message has been edited by Ron K. Fox (edited 11-03-2000).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
this is great wowowowowowowow you need icq so i can talk to you simply yuh |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
absolutely fantastic..loved it Ron..  so cute ..gave me the giggles by the four line haa.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
ROFL...waaaaaaaaaaaay cute Ron  |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
Ron, just what I needed, very funny!  Regards Jon |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hey Ron.... You are good!! The more I read of yours, the more I have to read of yours!!! This is so funny, and I like the phrasing!!  Follow your dream! |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Too cute! I'm gonna add it to my library lol < !signature--> "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." [This message has been edited by Saxoness (edited 11-03-2000).] |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RonK~ this tickles me......  such a fun read. -SEA |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I know how to sew...nice neat little stitches...hehehe cute write Don't close your eyes to the possibilities |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
you hve no idea of the pants i go through |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Ron-"Sew" touching, made me smile. Nicely done. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Ron .... excellent! Fabulous writing, I so enjoyed this ... wonderful style and creativity, a great read! Thanks for the smiles! Best wishes, /Kit |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ron- LOL...this is too cute. i'm lovin' it! thanks for the chuckle, my friend. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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