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A Tear From The Heart
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A Tear From The Heart |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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A < !signature-->Tear Slowly Slides down My cheek as I sit Here and think about All the love that you have Given to me. What you have Shared with me.. a love I never Know could exist, let alone find in My life. You have given me a warmth I can feel inside this once lonely and cold Heart. You have given me faith in life and Love You have given me brand new eyes to see the world with. As I lie here, looking at you as you sleep so peaceful. I can feel my heart soar, my love grow. I lean over and whisper so softly in your ear How much I love you ~~Tara aka rp25  [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 09-30-2000).] |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
what a faboo love poem. great sentiments and warmth contained in your tear. well penned! if i may be so bold as to suggest a title... "a lovely tear" Everyone's got their demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Ethan - Thank you for stopping by! I'm happy you stopped in Thank you for your suggestion as well... I am soo bad at thinking of titles..hehe  |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Ohhh..this is just beautiful... Loved it - so gentle and sincere. K"He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Severn - Thank you so much I'm happy you enjoyed it. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
What a wonderful sentiment you showed in this piece and I love the format as well. You are getting to nothing short of amazing in your growth. How about "Tear From The Heart"? |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Lovely, nice to feel the happiness. Catalinamoon |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Mark - Thank you for the encouraging words.. and for the title! I think that is the one thing, trying to find a title, that frustrates me most  If you don't mind.. I do believe I'm going to use your suggestion Thanks again.catalinamoon -I'm happy to see you dropping in Thank you for your nice reply ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I would be nothing short of honored to have you use it. Thank you much and now you for sure Know that I always come back and read the replies to my replies.LOL BTW-how are the worm and tadpole doing? Did you know that they passed your name on to some of their friends like the termite and the snail???? They say they feel left out and want you to write of them as well |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Mark - ...A...termite..and .. a snail???? Um.. well.. ok. ~blinks a few times~ And I thought the tadpole and worm thing was odd! lolol. I will attempt..something?  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Great write, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Rose, this is so tender and the presentation just complimented the beauty you have weaved in expression... I quietly sigh it's a beauty Rose! Coco |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Rosepetals25- wonderful write. i like it lots. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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poetic_imperfection Junior Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 45 |
Great poem. The style fit it perfect. PLY |
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