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you are the storyteller......
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you are the storyteller...... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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you are the storyteller hello storyteller, pleased you are here you glimpsed the title, it drew you near for it is within you to engrave the line that brings the tangle to close up fine hello raconteur, you weaver of life it is within you to tell of the strife it is within you to weave the dream it is the lifeblood of papers by ream hello teller of tale, in the cloth a story on walls in caves, in fields of glory in dreams unbound, in spirit it flies in writer of prose, in poetry’s disguise for within you rests this burden to share to lift, to guide, ah, a chronicler rare a gift that you bestow, this onus of care to pen of love, your point middling to fair to write a thought, to disclose a spark to travel the waves, in this, your ark to speak from the heart, this wayward way to encompass all life, in what you would say hello storyteller, so pleased are we that you are here hello raconteur, you weaver of life so fine hello teller of tales, in your cloth lies the story for within you here, lies the life of the vine. Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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desperado Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 312FT Hood,Tx |
what a grand and wonderful poem sunshine, a certainly uplifting peom for a night of sadness. thank you for this poem. I needed something like this tonight. "There were times in my life when I was going insane tryin to walk through the pain when I lost my grip and I hit the floor yeah I thought I could leave but couldn't get out the door" - Aerosmith "Amazing" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Excellent, one of your best. *L* Sy |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ This is just PERFECT ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
desperado, all of our thoughts are with you this lonely night...take these words then and cherish them, for it is who you are... Sy, thank you Sir! I will hold this praise close to me.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge, you snuck in on me! You rascal. Perfect? I hope so...it is for all of you who work so hard to do what you do...so well... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Karilea ~ Oh wow, how you just keep shining! This is simply wonderful!!! Bonnie |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Bonnie, thank you my dear...this is all because of the people here...the ones that pen with their souls... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, she wears the crown, she wears the crown. (That's was a song I think, but I might be wrong) But if I am, I'm not about this poem of yours, par excellance, brilliant and so well constructed. This is superb, wild applause, and bravos and lots lots more. Praise where and when it's due, and it is love, it really is. Love this one too. Take care love Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marsha, you dear poet, I do not wear the crown, but perhaps someday I will share a jewel...for the crown you speak of is universal, so that all who aspire shall wear it... thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
If you have a jewel, then it shines very bright my friend. . . just like you, and just like this poem. . . Wonderful. . . and oh, btw? Welcome. . .  ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Sunshine, Glad I didn't miss this one ( as I do with so many). Excellent ! Thanks Doc |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sven, thank you for being the poetic raconteur that you are... Doc, it's always good to see you catch one, thank you for catching this... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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