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An Image Yet To Be
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An Image Yet To Be |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Specks of light in contrast seem to pierce a curtain held by concepts anchored 'gainst the stream as if secured by weld I stand within this rigid frame assailed by frequencies invisible to naked eye An image yet to be Sub particles at un-known speeds that through my surface slam must surely leave some vaprous trace upon the film I am undeveloped , primitive and oh so very slow If possessed of sufficient need can one aquire their glow ? Tethered to this conciousness exposed will I absorb the sub-atomic properties to reach beyond this orb and there-by out-ward radiate my own visible light in contrast to the dark I feel alone within this night ? An image that will shine I hope with some intensity A glimmer of an isotope of what's becoming me |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Hey Doc, there's light at the end of the tunnel in this fabulous piece along with the brilliance of creation. Kethry. Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is exceptional writing...as Kethry said....the light is there at the end...very much enjoyed~ |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
I am trying to construct the most intelligent form of "WOW!" that I know...something properly befitting a bit of writing of this eloquence. Well, WOW! will just have to do, I think. (smiling) This is a prize poem, Dr. Moose, and you are quite the wordsmith.  Thank you ~ Rainydays |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Kethry, Thanks .In some way each of the postings I read here represent those particles . As they are absorbed , I cannot help but think that they are in some way reflected . Butterflies, Thank you . I'm glad you enjoyed this.This is as close as I have come to expressing my thoughts on how poetry has changed me . Rainydays, My thanks to you for taking the time to reply.It is gratifying to know that some actually seem to enjoy my ramblings . Doc |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hi Doc, excellent writing, a touch of Poe a touch of Blake. But mostly you in dark opaque. Sy |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
y'know, I feel this way about it too...it's a process, yes? I just hope the shutter was open when my picture was taken! Great thought, Doc. Thanks. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oh. I almost forgot. well worth the think. spin again. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I can't add too much more to what others have said..I just know what I like...and this was special. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Sy, Quite cryptic , but thanks ... serenity, Yes for me it has become a process . I am always wondering where it will lead . If I can maintain that sense of wonder , perhaps I may yet write something of true worth . Nakd, Well how do I say this , Thanks ! Doc |
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