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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Such a poem with a title like this. A naked poem with ear-nibbling bliss, Interest peak, but there's not much to it! Made ya look, I knew I could do it! Not sure what your dirty mind expects... I'm sorry I lured you in with SEX!  |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
You got me hook line and sinker, I was thinking hope it belongs here and it's not to spiced up.. Toddles this was very very creative. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
very creative way to hook  Rich |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ROTFLMAO.....oooopssss...what am I doing here....peeking in right.....*lol* can't deny that you have penned it very ~sexy~  ...Charisma |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
Toddles, I'm a man what else would you expect? You got me!  Cheers Jon |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
LOL ... reeled me in hook, line and sinker, nice cast! Best wishes, /Kit |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Yes! I had to peek. Melton |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
LOL I loved it! This one was really creative. Bet you will be getting alot of people thinking this is different like I did. ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
Sorry to dissappoint And hope you don't frown. At Passions, I start at the Top and work my way down. [This message has been edited by The Lonely Stranger (edited 11-01-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
AAAWWWW Todd...and here I thought you wrote this just for lil ole me...ok ok...I WANT the real thing now guy...consider this a challenge... |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Madison Avenue's got nothin' on you!!  |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Rotflmao, I'm just gonna say thanks to all of you at once, (Except for Paula: An invitation huh? Well) because I am on my lunch break and it would take too long... still ROTFL... Thanks again you guys!!! http://www.ToddMichaelPhillips.com |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Tis no excuse darlin man...ya gonna accept my challenge..or what? |
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emily Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 142USA |
this should have gone into the challenge section for sure..... Emily |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hi Toddles well I just couldn't resist this one and ya know what it's a sweet rhyme had me giggling this morn!  Coco |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
This following verse is not an orginal, a friend in Houston sent it to me... Roses are red, pickles are green, I love your legs and what's in between, I love your style, I love your class, But most of all I love your ass. http://www.ToddMichaelPhillips.com |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Dirty mind? WHERE?? LEMME ATTEM!!  *quickly hiding mine* I like this. It was fun, but I have just one other thing to say...YOU TEASE YOU!! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Now that is what I call a trick (not a treat)! Corinne |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Can you say FISH ON? yep, I loved the title (hee hee) so I peaked in and what do I find?! A hook! Great job! -SEA |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Yep it was a trick (but not a TRICK if ya know what I mean) I should have saved this one for April Fools day! Thanks girls! http://www.ToddMichaelPhillips.com |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Ya know - I had my comment to this one all planned before I even opened it... It was going to be something like... "Do you think that just the title of a poem can make people open it?".... If you really want to find out, just repost it and call it "Untitled"... hehe..  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Have to agree with Nan, I was thinking the same thing. I saw the title and saw the number of replies. Sex will do it every time! Very creative. Sandra |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
very clever if i may say actually, i wanted to read it then bash at you for posting something so ....you know what i mean. I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Acies
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
very clever if i may say actually, i wanted to read it then bash at you for posting something so ....you know what i mean. I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Thanks Catalina & Acire! http://www.ToddMichaelPhillips.com |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
It works for me too No matter....I still enjoyed the poem Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I know at least one person - who will see this response - and say "I knew you'd read that... " and I'll say "yep" |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
im takin animal biology is all |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Peppermint, Wilfred & Walt... Thanks for reading! http://www.ToddMichaelPhillips.com |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
heehee!! very funny... hugs, dg "i could hide out under there...i just made you say 'underwear'...i could leave but i'll just stay--all my stuff's here anyway..." |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Thank you for the hugs DG!!!! http://www.ToddMichaelPhillips.com |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Todd I saw the title and couldn't resist when it comes to a hook you need no assist I was hoping someone would get kissed Well I'm glad I read, though nothing was missed. Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Thanks Kethry for that cute verse! http://www.ToddMichaelPhillips.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Toddles, Perfect little didy here, I passed it up quiet a few times before taking a peak, and I am glad I did, you got me on this one, loved it. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
I finally had to peek...Got me..aarrrrghhh. Lots of laughs...Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Hi Ron, Hi Cerenity, thanks for peeking, you voyeurs! Todd-Michael Phillips...A Passion's Resident Poet since 5/19/1999 |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
I can't get enough! I admit it! < !signature-->I want it each chance I can get it! Passions flowing! I just can't resist! My FRIENDS, you are Wordologist! You keep me craving, time after time! PIP's a drug! I'm addicted to rhyme! Todd-Michael Phillips...A Passion's Resident Poet since 5/19/1999 [This message has been edited by Toddles (edited 11-02-2000).] |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Yep Toddles, you got me to look....oh well...now I want to see you take that challenge that was proposed to you earlier in this thread!!! Enjoyed your creativity and rhyme!!! Take Care, Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Justbleu: Thanks for the reply, guess you're talking about the Paula Challenge, I'm working on it, just trying to make sure there's no jealous husband in the picture first. LOL Thanks again! Todd-Michael Phillips...A Passion's Resident Poet since 5/19/1999 |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
In that lacy wedding gown You were the prettiest gal in town And you look great in a bikini too. I like the way you flirt In a wet T-shirt And that slinky dress of baby blue Oh yes everything you wear Is so sexy and so cute, But I love you best of all In your skintight birthday suit! You're always in fashion In jeans or just a dress You look good in polyester or permanent-press Your whole wardrobe reflects your beauty and your style Still I prefer to see you Wearing nothing but a smile You're a sight for my soar eyes, Lord there is no dispute. Oh I love you best of all In that precious birthday suit! Todd-Michael Phillips...A Passion's Resident Poet since 5/19/1999 |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
A quest for the sweetest desire Sail with me upon Passion's waves tonight Sit back and allow me to inspire Wearing only your gaze and the moonlight [This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 11-02-2000).] |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Ty BDC for the tender verse.... Todd Todd-Michael Phillips...A Passion's Resident Poet since 5/19/1999 |
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Felix Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 78USA |
mncvpaeirutyakhsglxlcjgoeirty!!!!! I hate getting got...but have to admit I got got good. (yes i am literate) Did you ever read about a frog who dreamed of being a king, and then became one? - Neil Diamond |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
LOL sorry Felix... Thanx for sharing!!! Todd-Michael Phillips...A Passion's Resident Poet since 5/19/1999 |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
They say after you marry things can change. Well to a husbands dismay his wife gained weight as the years passed, mostly it all ended up on her ass. (sorry) Well he used to joke to her and say she was as big as 3 BBQ's. One night the husband felt a little frisky and decided he wanted a little action. To his dismay the wife was not going to give in. He asked her why in such a loving way and she told him straight. "Honey if you think that I am going to lite 3 BBQ'S just for you little sausage. Think again". I hope you liked.... sorry Just the mood seemed to make it fit. Loved the versions you posted. Thanks Fee Expressions, are the most important aspects, they create impressions |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
LOL Fee, thanks for the story!!! |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
Thanks to all who replied & shared!!! Todd-Michael Phillips...A Passion's Resident Poet since 5/19/1999 |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
okay, Toddles ... who's your marketing communications firm(?) ... very slick ... i was tempted earlier, but finally, i have succumb ... nice work ... My calling before me, let quill be my offering; For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive. M.A. |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
LOL MA, it's the same people who promote Madonna! Hey glad you caved in finally! Todd-Michael Phillips...A Passion's Resident Poet since 5/19/1999 |
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Toddles Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 396New Orleans, Louisiana |
I still like this one... Roses are red, pickles are green, I love your legs and what's in between, I love your style, I love your class, But most of all I love your ass. |
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