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Faith |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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I have faith that I will see Devotion deep inside of me Get the chance, and with it share A love of life beyond compare The trust that there is still a life For me to find without a price No more pain, misguided trust Belief that there is love for us Conviction in this game we play And move on to another day Assurance that there is no doubt Isn’t that what life’s about? Reliance on a heart so true Repairing hurts, both old and new I wake this day and start again Controlling fears of where and when And just see where it goes. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is a perfect poem to end my evening with, It is good to see there are men in the world that want to have the things I do. Keep writing, you will inspire us all. Sandra |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
great meter, good rhyme - short - to the point - thoughtful - insiteful - Did I miss anything? (great post ~S~) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I really liked this one Rich. Well written and thoughtful. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i echo everything Wil said..I enjoyed spiked looking forward to reading more of your poems..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Rich...this is exquisite...you write beautifully |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Rich* Without faith we have nothing to hold onto...this is excellent..the thought and the emotion in it draw the reader to take a look into your heart on this piece...excellent work~ |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
I am very pleased with the responce of all of you. Thank you. It's so nice to have such a wide variety of talent and views in one place. Rich |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I just had to come back and read this again...it tugs at my heart |
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