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tracie66
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0 posted 2000-10-29 04:52 AM



Shooting across the sky
Tonight
Amazing how you take flight
Roaming through the night sky
Lighting a path as you fly
Igniting happiness in my heart
Gazing at you, you soon depart
Hoping to see you again tonight
Totally hypnotized by your light

Straying upon another's view
Tonight
Allowing their heart to take flight
Racing over the star lit sky
Blazing your light as you fly by
Recreating your image for others to see
Igniting happiness
Giving wishes for free
Helping to give hope, where no other lies
Transporting yourself throughout the night skies





Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



© Copyright 2000 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 2000-10-29 05:19 AM


Stars can have that effect sometimes...

nice write!

K

"He looked across the
silky surface of the Severn...
it was a famously difficult
river with fierce tides..."


From Jack Maggs


Marsha
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2 posted 2000-10-29 05:26 AM


Tracie, this is soooo great, it's written beautifully, and it's form and flow is excellant. I Love this one, it's ace!
Take care
                  Marsha
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2000-10-29 05:30 AM


Very nice Tracie....James
Alle'cram
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4 posted 2000-10-29 06:26 AM


Hi Tracie,
  This is beautifully written. So cheerful and hopeful. Wonderful acrostic.    Marcy

Ron K. Fox
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5 posted 2000-10-29 12:20 PM


starlight starbright...very cleverly done
Kit McCallum
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6 posted 2000-10-29 12:55 PM


Ahhh, I've wished on many of these myself Tracie ... wonderful acrostic, well done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Robert Joseph
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7 posted 2000-10-29 01:22 PM



Tracie, Stars are so alluring, and your words lead the eyes to their magic!

Robert Joseph

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8 posted 2000-10-29 01:30 PM


Tracie~
This is just LOVELY !
What a wonderful presentation of thought !
I just love it !
Ya' done REAL GOOD !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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BSC
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9 posted 2000-10-29 01:40 PM


Oooooh how I love those twinkling stars Tracie, beautiful poem, terrific acrostic!!! Bonnie
juliet_2u
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10 posted 2000-10-29 01:50 PM


Tracie this is great. Ya just gotta love those stars. You did a wonderful job here my friend.
Hugs,
Juls

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11 posted 2000-10-29 02:06 PM


This is a wonderful poem
Really like the way that you did it
A warm and caring look at the stars
Conveying the feelings that we all get
In our hearts
Everytime that we're with ones that we love. . .



------------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Janet Marie
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12 posted 2000-10-29 02:44 PM


trace.. this is excellent and very creative..
I have noticed the stars have been your muse for awhile now...
and they are inspiring some awesome work from you...
keep em comming girlie  
later-twinkle-star-gator
jm

Mark Bohannan
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13 posted 2000-10-29 02:51 PM


WOW!!!!!!  You can light up my sky with your words of verse anytime. This was beautiful in both presentation and content.  Flow as well.  You have penned a very truthful verse of the promise in the stars that so many of us turn to and you have done it with perfection.  I applaud you.
Elizabeth
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14 posted 2000-10-29 02:54 PM


A well done acrostic!

Elizabeth


You cling to your ways and leave mine to me.
Suum cuique.
~Elizabeth



tracie66
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15 posted 2000-10-30 04:17 AM


WOW!!!!
So many replies, I am humbled  
THANKS my FRIENDS
I was feeling lazy tonight and wasn't going to reply to each individually but how could I not with all these wonderful praises
Well here they are:

Severn~
They are the most beautiful thing at night when the sky is clear...worth the time to take the look  
Love ya
Tracie~

Marsha~
Beautiful reply....thanks hon I appreciate it  
Tracie~

James~
Always love it when you drop by..thanks  
Tracie~

Marcy~
  I'm so pleased you liked this..thanks hon
Tracie~

Ron~
You liked   that's great...thanks
Tracie~

Kit~
Wishing upon a star is wonderful but to wish upon a falling star even more so...keep on wishin my friend  
Tracie~

Robert~
WOW!!!
You have said something so beautiful in one small sentence...thanks
Tracie~

Hello dear Marge~
Thanks for your inspiring words, always there to give us inspiration and tell us we did well...thanks  
Love ya Tracie~

Bonnie~
Nice reply hon..thanks for your time  
Love Tracie~

Juls~
Hey there   good to see ya
Great comments and I appreciate it friend
Love Tracie~

Sven~
My friend, how your words warm me, love the way you replied...excellent  
Love Tracie~

Janny~
Sweet one
Yeah they have, I just started to notice...wonderful thing  
Love ya
Tracie~

Mark~
Like WOW!!! mate
you have given me a swollen head with all those comments....no really thanks Mark I appreciate your reply immensely
Love Tracie~

Liz~
Thanks hon for a sweet reply  
Love Tracie~


Floating winged ~HUGS~ everyone's way

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Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe




[This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 10-30-2000).]

Butterflies_dont_cry
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16 posted 2000-10-30 05:41 AM


So very beautiful Tracie...the hope that
those little stars can carry within their
delicate glow is amazing...beautiful work my
friend~

Charisma
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17 posted 2000-10-30 07:32 AM


*wow*...I almost let this one slipping through my fingers...glad that I found it...enjoyed your style and presentation....
excellent done.
(hugs)

Charisma

Kethry
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18 posted 2000-10-30 07:52 AM


Tracie66

Sitting here waiting
Tonight was the night
And as I waited, I saw
Radiance bright
Shining so softly
Tracie, I see
Running the image
Up, pure poetry
Counting the glimmers
Knight, poetry shimmers.

Be well
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

wayoutwalt
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19 posted 2000-10-30 08:37 AM


Say
Tracie
A
Really
Beautiful
Undulating poem
Caffeine
Kicking it
Sorry

Sudhir Iyer
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20 posted 2000-10-31 06:10 AM


This is a most wonderful acrostic, Tracie, my friend...

it is such a pleasure to read your poems... and this is no exception....

regards,
sudhir

tracie66
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21 posted 2000-11-03 03:59 AM


Butterflies~
Thank you so much for a most sweet reply  
Love Tracie~

Charisma~
winged ~HUG~
Thanks for your lovely comments  
Love Tracie~

Hello there sweet Keth  
Look at you tonight...thanks sweetie
Love Tracie~

Hey Walt  
Love your STARBUCKS...Grrreat
Love Tracie~

Ah Sud...thanks
It is a pleasure to read your replies and of course you great poetry  
Love Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



EagleOne
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22 posted 2000-11-03 04:10 AM


The stars can certainly be insperational, a wonderful piece.  

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

tracie66
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23 posted 2000-11-03 06:20 PM


Hi there EagleOne  
Thanks so much for checking this out and replying....much appreciated
Tracie~
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Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe




[This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 11-03-2000).]

Dr.Moose1
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24 posted 2000-11-03 09:07 PM


Tracie,
I must admit I'm a sucker for acrostics , and this one was excellent .
Doc

tracie66
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25 posted 2000-11-04 06:40 PM


Hi there Doc  
Thanks for taking the time to pop by, glad you like this (I'm a sucker for acrostics as well) Love em
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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