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Starlight, Starbright......Acrostic
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Starlight, Starbright......Acrostic |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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Shooting across the sky Tonight Amazing how you take flight Roaming through the night sky Lighting a path as you fly Igniting happiness in my heart Gazing at you, you soon depart Hoping to see you again tonight Totally hypnotized by your light Straying upon another's view Tonight Allowing their heart to take flight Racing over the star lit sky Blazing your light as you fly by Recreating your image for others to see Igniting happiness Giving wishes for free Helping to give hope, where no other lies Transporting yourself throughout the night skies Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Stars can have that effect sometimes... nice write!  K"He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Tracie, this is soooo great, it's written beautifully, and it's form and flow is excellant. I Love this one, it's ace! Take care Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Tracie....James |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Hi Tracie, This is beautifully written. So cheerful and hopeful. Wonderful acrostic. Marcy |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
starlight starbright...very cleverly done |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ahhh, I've wished on many of these myself Tracie ... wonderful acrostic, well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Tracie, Stars are so alluring, and your words lead the eyes to their magic! Robert Joseph |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ This is just LOVELY ! What a wonderful presentation of thought ! I just love it ! Ya' done REAL GOOD ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oooooh how I love those twinkling stars Tracie, beautiful poem, terrific acrostic!!! Bonnie |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Tracie this is great. Ya just gotta love those stars. You did a wonderful job here my friend. Hugs, Juls |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This is a wonderful poem Really like the way that you did it A warm and caring look at the stars Conveying the feelings that we all get In our hearts Everytime that we're with ones that we love. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
trace.. this is excellent and very creative.. I have noticed the stars have been your muse for awhile now... and they are inspiring some awesome work from you... keep em comming girlie later-twinkle-star-gator jm |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
WOW!!!!!! You can light up my sky with your words of verse anytime. This was beautiful in both presentation and content. Flow as well. You have penned a very truthful verse of the promise in the stars that so many of us turn to and you have done it with perfection. I applaud you. |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
A well done acrostic! Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW!!!! So many replies, I am humbled THANKS my FRIENDS I was feeling lazy tonight and wasn't going to reply to each individually but how could I not with all these wonderful praises Well here they are: Severn~ They are the most beautiful thing at night when the sky is clear...worth the time to take the look Love ya Tracie~ Marsha~ Beautiful reply....thanks hon I appreciate it Tracie~ James~ Always love it when you drop by..thanks Tracie~ Marcy~ I'm so pleased you liked this..thanks honTracie~ Ron~ You liked that's great...thanksTracie~ Kit~ Wishing upon a star is wonderful but to wish upon a falling star even more so...keep on wishin my friend Tracie~ Robert~ WOW!!! You have said something so beautiful in one small sentence...thanks Tracie~ Hello dear Marge~ Thanks for your inspiring words, always there to give us inspiration and tell us we did well...thanks Love ya Tracie~ Bonnie~ Nice reply hon..thanks for your time Love Tracie~ Juls~ Hey there good to see yaGreat comments and I appreciate it friend Love Tracie~ Sven~ My friend, how your words warm me, love the way you replied...excellent Love Tracie~ Janny~ Sweet one Yeah they have, I just started to notice...wonderful thing  Love ya Tracie~ Mark~ Like WOW!!! mate you have given me a swollen head with all those comments....no really thanks Mark I appreciate your reply immensely Love Tracie~ Liz~ Thanks hon for a sweet reply Love Tracie~  < !signature--> Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 10-30-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
So very beautiful Tracie...the hope that those little stars can carry within their delicate glow is amazing...beautiful work my friend~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow*...I almost let this one slipping through my fingers...glad that I found it...enjoyed your style and presentation.... excellent done. (hugs) Charisma |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Tracie66 Sitting here waiting Tonight was the night And as I waited, I saw Radiance bright Shining so softly Tracie, I see Running the image Up, pure poetry Counting the glimmers Knight, poetry shimmers. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Say Tracie A Really Beautiful Undulating poem Caffeine Kicking it Sorry |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is a most wonderful acrostic, Tracie, my friend... it is such a pleasure to read your poems... and this is no exception.... regards, sudhir |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Butterflies~ Thank you so much for a most sweet reply Love Tracie~ Charisma~ winged ~HUG~ Thanks for your lovely comments Love Tracie~ Hello there sweet Keth Look at you tonight...thanks sweetie Love Tracie~ Hey Walt Love your STARBUCKS...Grrreat Love Tracie~ Ah Sud...thanks It is a pleasure to read your replies and of course you great poetry Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
The stars can certainly be insperational, a wonderful piece. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hi there EagleOne Thanks so much for checking this out and replying....much appreciated Tracie~< !signature--> Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 11-03-2000).] |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Tracie, I must admit I'm a sucker for acrostics , and this one was excellent . Doc |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hi there Doc Thanks for taking the time to pop by, glad you like this (I'm a sucker for acrostics as well) Love em Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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