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The Look |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Across the room our eyes meet That glance is charged with feeling Love hums across the bond we share It's full of secret meaning Time stands still for us right now No one exists, save we I feel your kiss, your arms round me It's such a special blending Always together, never apart Our bond is one of mind and heart I smile at you, I know you see And read the promise made by me Tonight, my love, a look won't do A night of love for me and you Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Well, I hope the night is as good as planned  Beatiful love poem. You can feel the look passing between you. Great. Sandra |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'I smile at you, I know you see And read the promise made by me Tonight, my love, a look won't do A night of love for me and you' Hey, pepper! Great poem! So romantic. I love it!! sp  Do not go where the path may lead, but instead, go where there is no path and leave a trail. - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Peppermint~ 'Love hums across the bond we share' Humming along here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
a look that could melt your heart...you summed it up warmly. nice read. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love it peppermint...sometimes a look can get you in trouble  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
pepper- very beautiful. i'm loving this one. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Oh Pepper...this is stunning! You wove the perfect emotion with just the right amount of tenderness to weave a most romantic poem...beautiful writing~ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
...Always together, never apart Our bond is one of mind and heart I smile at you, I know you see And read the promise made by me... very nice..i like this hugs, dg "i could hide out under there...i just made you say 'underwear'...i could leave but i'll just stay--all my stuff's here anyway..." |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Peppermint...I am waiting for a night like this...Love hums... hmmmmmmm..wonderful ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
One of those nights that we all love so much and as for me, I will be waiting for one of my own where a look will no longer do, though a lot can be said and felt in just a simple look. Beautiful and hopeful verse. Loved it much. |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Pepper, Oh-My, gulp! well, have fun! gal, you shot from the hip with this 'en. So enjoyed, good writing. Marcy |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
pepermint this was very nice. Such a beautiful flow. Rich |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Thank you all for stopping by and reading and for your very nice comments.... as you can see, the game is afoot; the heat is definitely on!!!  laughs Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Pepper I hope the ending worked out for you. I really enjoyed the mood set here and the flow was great...good read!!...ethome |
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